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Old 05-10-05, 04:17 AM   #1
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Murderous minds, Murdz and Ca$per...

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ok this is a collab by me and ca$per about the mind of a sickk killa.. i got the first 2 verses and he spittin the last verse..the hook is in blue...



murderous minds, were in murderous times,
crouch aside a dumpster, or outside your blinds,
you'd betta lock up your doors, n cock up ur nines,
you ain't escapin fate, cuz im comin tonight,


Mentality swayed,by the brave soldiers who played,
in my way, they got slayed, n portrayed a certain a stage,
of my illness, that thrills with, a certain type of stillness,
you'll feel this, when u see the knife that i kill with,
im killin sis, n im packin 9 inch drillin bits,
hackin at your spine ,down the line, til it rips n splits,
flip that bitch, attackin at her gine, grip er lips,
twisted up, hands slippin off her hips,
leave some bloody strips, in the midst of her face,
above the chin they are placed,and praised on with disgrace,
cuz u were raped,and defaced,by a man with no traits,
who escaped from this land, with no sound or no trace,
won't be found in one place, won't stand ground in some base,
cuz a detective's perspective,is inbound on this case,



murderous minds, were in murderous times,
crouch aside a dumpster, or outside your blinds,
you'd betta lock up your doors, n cock up ur nines,
you ain't escapin fate, cuz im comin tonight,


me and casper stay strayfin, n tapin,
the murders we take place in,
Wes Craven, wouldnt't test the methods,
I use to do my prey in, bloods sprayin,
like that horror flick, with that jason,
or that more than sick, man hunt game for playstation,
im comin from ur basement, you can hear me pacin,
creepin up your stairs, your about to get a facelift,
so face it, n take it, im takin all your bracelets,
rippin out your braces, your life i'll erase it,
I can taste it,the hatred,it's flowin from my waist it-
slowly grows to my nose, if it blows your gettin blasted,
home alone.. on the phone, exposin bones are my basics,
escapist's, couldn't even take the chase from this rapist,
I stay pissed, to ensure I spray shit and make hits,
meetin my equateance ain't a treat, cuz im weak with my patience,



murderous minds, were in murderous times,
crouch aside a dumpster, or outside your blinds,
you'd betta lock up your doors, n cock up ur nines,
you ain't escapin fate, cuz im comin tonight,


i gotta loaded semi-automatik,and im prowlin outside yer window......
run up in yo home to rob you,but im just gonna take yo life though......
never leave my crib without,at least two loaded n cocked glockz.....
if im comin to rob your family,then ill be str8 up in tha jury box......
cause when i come through,i leave a murderous crime scene.......
your ass rollin in wheelchairs,after hot rocz penetrate yer spleen....
see i aint gonna claim gangsta,unlike most of u fake souljaz......
youll see when tha time comes,when me and my fam roll ya.......
u see my boi murdz he harder than u,dont deny tha fact......
so much dro smoke in our pad,hits up your respiratory track......
livin legendz returned, oh yeah,were tha new generation........
after i visit your hometown,yall got a murder investigation.......
come to my home youll see,we play for keeps little boyz......
livin legendz uses live roundz,while yall still playin wit toyz.....
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Old 05-10-05, 05:31 AM   #2
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Rightio this is some gangsta ish. I liked Murdz's vocab nice flow too some of the imagery was good.
Second dude rhymes were a bit basic nice structure.

Overall not bad I could imagine this audio 8/10
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Old 05-10-05, 05:41 AM   #3
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thanks uppin....
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Old 05-10-05, 08:12 AM   #4
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word uppin this yall........................................
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Old 05-10-05, 10:57 AM   #5
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This was a pretty decent drop
i was really feeling it,
All had some nice concept, good feeling
Structure was pretty off , it moved around in every verse
You had some nice mutlies, felt that you can could
have used better worden in your verses , and better vocab
simplicit but it was still good , overall pretty decent drop work on
vocab and wordplay , and how you word your verses,
and try to match up your bars , so it can catch the readers attention
Drop a link! or you know what!
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Old 05-10-05, 08:59 PM   #6
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Old 05-10-05, 09:06 PM   #7
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^ Your not allowed to rock a duckerz thing in your sig when you ducked my Alias...

This collab was allright though...Murdz had the best part...props...
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Old 05-11-05, 12:37 AM   #8
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thanks yo... uppin...
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Old 05-11-05, 01:40 AM   #9
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Quote:
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^ Your not allowed to rock a duckerz thing in your sig when you ducked my Alias...

This collab was allright though...Murdz had the best part...props...



Duck? Battle me then.....And, I'll read this tomorrow morning, I'm going to bed now!
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Old 05-12-05, 04:18 AM   #10
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upinnnnnnnn please...
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Old 05-12-05, 04:26 PM   #11
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uppin once mo chea ...............................................
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Old 05-12-05, 04:45 PM   #12
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that's wha'm talkin bout... nice drop homie...
I'll keep feedbakin home, RTF on my WEEDMAN shit
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Old 05-13-05, 01:52 AM   #13
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tahnks upppin................
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Old 05-13-05, 05:41 PM   #14
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This Has Been Bumped To Tha Top Like An Escalater.......
If Leave Sum Honest Feed,ill Return Tha Favour.........
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Old 05-13-05, 05:52 PM   #15
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Good verses ta both emcees...
hook was aiite,but wit tha verses i feel tha hook couldve been betta
I pictured each verse,seem'd like a suspense movie nah mean
structure is good.....like i always say,true emcess can read any structure
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