did this basically keyed, needs some work but gimmie some feedback

nigga if u had a choice...life or death...
what would you choose??

a'yo shoulda had an option before I entered this life/
Before I cried all these tears and endured the strife/
God shoulda asked me what will it be? life or death here with me?/
But how could I make my choice when im neither dead or alive?/
My soul not yet constructed with God's image in order to survive/
But the shit that I go through it's just stressing my faith endurance/
Just playin by my own rules everyday and livin without insurance/
So why pick life when I can bypass the life test?/
God told me the easy path out ain't always the best/
I can't choose death now, suicide's a sin/
Why can't we have a choice before our lives begin?/
Shit death gotta be simple, cuz life's a bitch/
Greed infested minds and goals to get rich/
No pain no gain so I'm satisfied I choose life/
To gain eternal happiness without working just doesn't seem right

if you had a choice, life or death, what would you choose?
if you had a choice, life or death, what would you choose?
if you had a choice, life or death, what would you choose?

What about the babies that don't experience the light outside the mother's womb?/
They never get to see the angels uncovering their tomb/
Maybe they got the choice, life or death, before their ability to speak/
God told them they would never get the chance to use their own feet/
Only in heaven is where they walk among the deceased/
Where everyone lives in a state of complete tranquillty and peace/
I wonder why I wasn't unborn, I never chose to enter into the unknown/
Why choose death outside when you can be safe at home?/

if you had a choice, life or death, what would you choose?
if you had a choice, life or death, what would you choose?
if you had a choice, life or death, what would you choose?

__________________
"Those who know don't talk,
and those who talk don't know a thing"
-Nas

"I swim but I wish I never learned, the water's too polluted with germs"
-Bradly Nowell

All my real niggaz stand Up.

feedback??

__________________
"Those who know don't talk,
and those who talk don't know a thing"
-Nas

"I swim but I wish I never learned, the water's too polluted with germs"
-Bradly Nowell

All my real niggaz stand Up.

feedback............

__________________
"Those who know don't talk,
and those who talk don't know a thing"
-Nas

"I swim but I wish I never learned, the water's too polluted with germs"
-Bradly Nowell

All my real niggaz stand Up.