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10-31-03, 12:26 PM | #1 | ||||||
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IP: 0CE4 6366
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(Jimmy) yo! no more games to be played, you can forget that crap Jimmy's back and ready to smack any fagget that's wack i'm done sitt'n back try'n to do what i can to help these cats it was cool when i never commented on any of their raps but now Jimmy done snapped, ready to bring back somebody on crack who you feared in this game call'um THE RIPPER, somebody who ain't fear'n no pain you fear'n his name, say it three times and he's ready to reign bring'n you real shit that people ain't scared to sang (Ripper) yeah! yall mutherfuckers thought different of me, fell out so now the shit is start'n to get real ugly, fuck sipp'n on bubbly cause when i start bust'n this shotgun, you bitches gone love me mutherfuckers couldn't wait to bring that beast back out i waited for Jimmy to fuck up so these people could see the king of the south run'n his mouth at anybody that's even comptemplat'n about doubt think'n Ripper won't come and take the cake bitch i'll murder you with this pistol until the chamber breaks and don't think i'm just talk'n and i ain't got nothin at stake i'm still wait'n for one of you pussy's to try and take my place and mutherfucker don't believe what you heard about me being at rest i only my best when this bullet caves in your chest and if i missed, then bitch! you can consider yourself blessed but best believe the next one is gonna do away with that vest and don't try to cover yourself or try to dodge whats next shit! with a corrupted mind like this, it's enough to give satan some stress and i bet one you mutherfuckers is scream'n out yes that i'm finally back to show how somebody is supposed to run this bitch and don't worry slick, you can't do shit to stop this Ripper's back baby............and i'm still the hottness |
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10-31-03, 12:34 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 93DD A374
THis was kinda average, dog. THis concept been touched on before and is kinda played so if you gonna so something liek that you gotta put a extra twist to it, yaknow. It seem like you have talent but you gotta learn to be more crative with your wordplay and flow.
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11-01-03, 06:09 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
thanks dog, i'll come a little bit stronger next time
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