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Old 10-31-03, 12:26 PM   #1
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"split personality"

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(Jimmy)
yo! no more games to be played, you can forget that crap
Jimmy's back and ready to smack any fagget that's wack
i'm done sitt'n back try'n to do what i can to help these cats
it was cool when i never commented on any of their raps
but now Jimmy done snapped,
ready to bring back somebody on crack who you feared in this game
call'um THE RIPPER, somebody who ain't fear'n no pain
you fear'n his name, say it three times and he's ready to reign
bring'n you real shit that people ain't scared to sang

(Ripper)
yeah! yall mutherfuckers thought different of me,
fell out so now the shit is start'n to get real ugly, fuck sipp'n on bubbly
cause when i start bust'n this shotgun, you bitches gone love me
mutherfuckers couldn't wait to bring that beast back out
i waited for Jimmy to fuck up so these people could see the king of the south
run'n his mouth at anybody that's even comptemplat'n about doubt
think'n Ripper won't come and take the cake
bitch i'll murder you with this pistol until the chamber breaks
and don't think i'm just talk'n and i ain't got nothin at stake
i'm still wait'n for one of you pussy's to try and take my place
and mutherfucker don't believe what you heard about me being at rest
i only my best when this bullet caves in your chest
and if i missed, then bitch! you can consider yourself blessed
but best believe the next one is gonna do away with that vest
and don't try to cover yourself or try to dodge whats next
shit! with a corrupted mind like this, it's enough to give satan some stress
and i bet one you mutherfuckers is scream'n out yes
that i'm finally back to show how somebody is supposed to run this bitch
and don't worry slick, you can't do shit to stop this
Ripper's back baby............and i'm still the hottness
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Old 10-31-03, 12:34 PM   #2
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THis was kinda average, dog. THis concept been touched on before and is kinda played so if you gonna so something liek that you gotta put a extra twist to it, yaknow. It seem like you have talent but you gotta learn to be more crative with your wordplay and flow.
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Old 11-01-03, 06:09 PM   #3
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thanks dog, i'll come a little bit stronger next time
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