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08-07-06, 03:52 AM
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Picture Perfect
IP: D40E 67D5
WHITE= Omega.
RED= Johnny 6-Feet GREEN= Valor The Writer Images play, in fascination of existence Words appear in great depth of definition that’s persistent. Troubled times recorded, struggled times explained Future starts to unfold, with a figure four of tenacious pain. Tears fall slow, like the ink from my pen World of destruction tour begins in the count from 1 to 10. Mind corrupted as pain is written and emphasized The ink bolds itself and italically prints with meaningless underlines World spins with no fear, nor with no destination in hand So does my finger tips gripping tight writing the art for the world of man. So they say, life is held in the sand of times Well the sand seeps fast through the very fingers that write my life. Pages fill faster than expected from the mind The ink turns into blood as I cut deep and slowly a fine line. My heart pounds and crops, its starts to write its own plot Time stops along with a writer’s block…. ……………No beat of a heart as the pen suddenly drops. . . The Urban Artist Sprays of paint and thoughts divine make a picture perfect Rays of hate hurts the mind, as the witless murk it But artists persevere and create visual prophesies Inspiration to create inspiration, crush literal mockeries Beads of sweat dripped from his forehead, the brush stung with splinters The man, bent on his task, through half a dozen winters His labor of love, a slave to the heavens above Realizing a delicate scene, thoughts free as seventy doves He sacrificed eating for his bottles of paint His ambition was not to be great, just to follow his state of mind, a shocking result, the colors come in focus He shakes out his trance, some kind of hocus pocus There it was, his vision made flesh, picture perfect He collapsed exhausted to his knees, but by God it was worth it . . The Painter the mural of a fantasy, in my art brings life why can't it be, beautiful souls from the inside no brutality, with no harm in my twisted reality walking into my pictures, dancing and singing loudly many nights of sweat, and bruised finger tips i paint my visions like the poetry flows from my lips its my passion, perfect pictures is where I’m living though creating wicked vivid visuals, of fond individuals sharing laughter, no room for catching up off a struggle no space to taste the burning sensation of tired muscles this life has no hustles, living healthy is the ultimate drug its never ending, no off buttons, batteries, or plugs every angle of this world is pronounced love, and dedication reaching for the stars on every try of each attempt, without hesitation its the habitat where every breathing creature lives in laughter and peace it's like each and every child's dream, its my perfect masterpiece
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-Chalkin' Up Your Future Last edited by Omega. : 08-07-06 at 03:57 AM. |
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08-07-06, 03:56 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232943
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232691
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08-07-06, 03:58 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: 2029 97B3
sexy...nuff said
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08-07-06, 04:00 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
yup yup and woot woot at the same time..
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08-07-06, 04:20 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 0B90 96F9
Word... Good shit by all of you.
I don't really have anything to say, advice-wise. But yeah, good stuff.
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08-07-06, 04:26 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
no prob man thanks!..
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08-09-06, 12:33 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: 2029 97B3
upppp innnnggg thisssss
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08-09-06, 02:30 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
upptiy up man its getting slept on more bad than RB.
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08-09-06, 08:50 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 0939 25DD
Can't understand the lack of feed on this,...
All come really dope, on a whole this was a really dope colab, all having nice styles mad it a really good read. Strong vocab was used by all nice complex verses. This was dope, stay up all 1~ |
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08-10-06, 01:36 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: 2029 97B3
WORD thanks man
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