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Wake up...
Smell the Folder's...Fem, I'm Bendin back your shoulders
Your a Vet? who told ya?...Girl you got beat by WillNova
Reppin Blue Print..Jus show's dis Dope don't kno the rope's
You got no Hope..Even your Sig know's your number of vote's
This just a Remix of -Body COunt- One Up 5 votes an I'm out
Some body answer this.."who the hell's Blue Print's Scout?"
Cus you belong in Rap as much as Juvenille in plaid....
Don't be mad...4 wins...an now your just dried up Mag..(marker)
Played' key word your success revolve's around vision blurr'd-
The only way you stand a chance is if reprecussion's reflect my words

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Malefic: Thought your verse started off a bit weak, but progressed as it went on. Punches and personals were reasonably nice. Flow and structure were nice too

Fem: Wasnt really feeling your verse at all, you had some attempted punches but these were weakened by your fucked structure. vocab could also be improved

v/Melific

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hmmmmmmmmm.......ok battle

mal: your verse started off ok but iy got pretty good.....Your punches were pretty good.......okay/good vocab

Fem: you you were okay.........ok punches......but you failed cuz mal came kinda harder and had stonrger punches..........okish vocab...........

v/ mel

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malefic:


Wake up...
Smell the Folder's...Fem, I'm Bendin back your shoulders
Your a Vet? who told ya?...Girl you got beat by WillNova
-great opener...
Reppin Blue Print..Jus show's dis Dope don't kno the rope's
You got no Hope..Even your Sig know's your number of vote's
-nice creativity...good personal, and good metas
This just a Remix of -Body COunt- One Up 5 votes an I'm out
Some body answer this.."who the hell's Blue Print's Scout?"
-first line was tight, but second line was mediocre and the punch could have been better
Cus you belong in Rap as much as Juvenille in plaid....
Don't be mad...4 wins...an now your just dried up Mag..(marker)
-wasnt fellin this one
Played' key word your success revolve's around vision blurr'd-
The only way you stand a chance is if reprecussion's reflect my words
-closure= 7/10

this is just a matter of being dismissed...
...no record of malefic audio, cause theres dips in his lisp.
-no structure...but personal was good
hes flushed emcee, thats why theres no mic in his fist...
...its a mouse that he grips, your just an online vigallant.
aint got the skill you want, this cat kills with font...
-metas are good, but need more wor play
...i kid you not, just a dyke behind a screen.
its like the pipe with out the green, just how you write behind the scenes...
-i like the pipe w/o the green line. nice
you'd need an edit button to equal out our rhymes...
...your just a sequal to the vines, like vin deisel's face in Times.(the mag)
-i saw that issue, they made a fool out of him, good punch, haha
you say your rymes are goin places, ya IRAQ...
...lie back, and think apon my facts of why your still sitting behind iMAC.
lacks structure, but nice creativity
dont worry your not tha only one whos pissed, ive got da list...
...battle buisiness is this, "step to me at your own risk".......sorry MaL but youve been DismiSSed.
-closure= 7/10

vote:close, but i give it to femcee... i admitt it was close but i was feeling femcee's creativity

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