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05-12-04, 09:55 AM | #1 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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Tapped confessin of a killer...
IP: 3240 794D
May 27, 2004
The setting: The room is chilly and dank, with a prominent odor resembling pine oil.. ..There is a tape recorded sitting at the center of a cherry-wood table.. 2 chairs surround it.. ..In one, Federal Agent Mike Milligan stares intently at the occupant of the second chair, Spencer Crawlings.. ..Spencer is about to give a tapped confessions detailing his role in the events surrounding the murder of a young mother two weeks prior.. ..Agent Milligan presses record on the machine.. The "click" sound reverberates in the room.. ..Spencer Crawlings begins to speak.. [center] Ur wonderin' if I tortured to death, stored pets under the porch..- Growin' up did I cross-dress, or was I neglected as a boy..- Haha..see, you're trying to test me as a ploy..- When I was little, you really couldn't detect me from the norm..- What's that noise..shut up, I'm trying to tell you this story..- Are you judging me man..ok, the details are gory..- It was..around 3 when I went out to the park..- I was walking the bike trail when I saw this lone broad..- But then I saw this kid too, so I went over to speak..- I could barely say a word, "Go away you old geek"..- The kid was cute, but da lady was brazen with words..- "You god damn cunt, I outta take this razor and..."..- Hmpf..well, I walked away but kept watch..- The kid looked young..I started rubbing my crotch..- Go away..who the fuck was she to tell me like that..- Fuck dat bitch, so I followed her trail in the bike path..- Damn bugs..making noises, shut up and let me think!..- I crept behind her, dat bitch didn't have a chance to even blink..- Hehe..FUCK, I grabbed her neck, he little son starting crying..- The bones in her neck poppin' sounded like fish when u fry it..- But I turned her around, I wanted to see her mug shot..- Her lips quivered, skin purplish as her eyes turned blood shot..- Don't say dat..fuck me, her drool was running down my hand..- I let go..she fell cold-limp like wilted rose, understand..- My boner was growing, then I snatched her son up..- Kissed his cheek, then lay him beside his mother..- yes Last edited by .::N-Sight::. : 05-12-04 at 10:17 AM. |
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05-12-04, 10:13 AM | #2 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 993A 10B0
nice, i didnt get it... but it looked nice
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05-12-04, 07:57 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 85B1 5859
what.......this was ill very creative... i like the way it started off to and the way it seemed like you were writing in like a journal or somthing with the date and then you enetered the drop and i liked that....something different in the mist of repetisious writing i loved this uppin for you
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05-12-04, 07:59 PM | #4 | |||||||
*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
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IP: 17B9 4202
aye pa i was chatting wit u when u was writting this and I KNEW it would be a hot one I KNEW IT WOULD ur vocab was nice i like ur structure..and ur words were vivid...keep it going..nice drop *UPPIN*
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