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First rapper was tight....lol. Sounds kinda like.....umm.....nevermind

Second rapper had a hollow sound. Flow was a little shakey at a point or two, but was ok overall.

Third rapper was as tight as the first one!!!! LOL.......nice drop Phenom

I think the problem was that you didn't sound as authentic as the rest of the track....keep working on it though, you can only get better....

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Note to you Akon was the secound rapper and he was singing the most of the
time...Thats why its made by AKON..

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lol... oh damn - thought my flow was gon match Styles... guess not. LOL. Thanks for the feed - uppin. Ya - man if you got any idea how to ditch the hollow sound - im always learning man. holla

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Notice I said second rapper and not second artist or second person in the song


Also.....if you don't plan on leaving feedback on the song, stay the fuck outta the threads....

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