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Murderer as an emcee n criminal (keeping my good shit til last)
IP: 6308 3348
Keep ya head up and never let it drop//
Don’t let ppl get in ya way you can never stop/// Feel the trigger of the gun as u hear it pop// ppl try to turn and run but its all part of the plot// You didn’t mean to harm no one you just wanted what you got// But now you’re in the limelight// And you’ve completely forgot, what just happened that night// Pulling ya trigger killing people, like I do with a mic// We both have a goal and opportunity in our sights// So its now the time, basically to do what we like, or what we do best// Plot another plan to invest// In the success we’ve had, which resulted in mess, a mass slaughter// You’re labelled now you’re a claimed to be a murderer// Just like I am, but I do it through and interpreter// I grab the mic and deliver// What ppl like, whether I’m black or white it doesn’t matter// So you now must take cover// From the cops, five’o, what ever for now you are to the city a terror a criminal// For you loaded a gun and popped 4 ppl// Where as I kill them off on a stage where it’s legal// You just must stay brave and be careful// For you too the public are lethal like I am too the mosh pit, I’m an idol// Until we both get arrested were gonna stand tall// And remain as the best over all// Were both murderers as an emcee and a criminal…
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alright to break it down. flow was a little choppy at some parts, u had some good multi's and some ok wordplay. I liked the topic. could use a bit more vocab and u had an alright structure. all in all nice drop for startin out keep elevatin. peace.
if u got the time check out mine and masta C's collabs called "High Time (feat. Masta C)" and "Hight Times *The Sequel* (feat. Masta C)" and leave some feedback. thanx in advance. peace.
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