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Old 10-29-03, 10:25 AM   #1
set-ignorance
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Murderer as an emcee n criminal (keeping my good shit til last)

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Keep ya head up and never let it drop//
Don’t let ppl get in ya way you can never stop///
Feel the trigger of the gun as u hear it pop//
ppl try to turn and run but its all part of the plot//
You didn’t mean to harm no one you just wanted what you got//
But now you’re in the limelight//
And you’ve completely forgot, what just happened that night//
Pulling ya trigger killing people, like I do with a mic//
We both have a goal and opportunity in our sights//
So its now the time, basically to do what we like, or what we do best//
Plot another plan to invest//
In the success we’ve had, which resulted in mess, a mass slaughter//
You’re labelled now you’re a claimed to be a murderer//
Just like I am, but I do it through and interpreter//
I grab the mic and deliver//
What ppl like, whether I’m black or white it doesn’t matter//
So you now must take cover//
From the cops, five’o, what ever for now you are to the city a terror a criminal//
For you loaded a gun and popped 4 ppl//
Where as I kill them off on a stage where it’s legal//
You just must stay brave and be careful//
For you too the public are lethal like I am too the mosh pit, I’m an idol//
Until we both get arrested were gonna stand tall//
And remain as the best over all//
Were both murderers as an emcee and a criminal…
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Old 10-29-03, 01:45 PM   #2
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alright to break it down. flow was a little choppy at some parts, u had some good multi's and some ok wordplay. I liked the topic. could use a bit more vocab and u had an alright structure. all in all nice drop for startin out keep elevatin. peace.

if u got the time check out mine and masta C's collabs called "High Time (feat. Masta C)" and "Hight Times *The Sequel* (feat. Masta C)" and leave some feedback. thanx in advance. peace.
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