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SyaNidal 5 83.33%
As5a5sIn5 1 16.67%
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Old 01-18-04, 07:58 PM   #1
As5a5sIn5
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As5a5sIn Vs. SyaNidal

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IIte Rulez as said in Bitch Slapped..
16 lines
No Hate, Crew, D/r, Votes
No Feedin' Recyclin' Bitin'
And We'll say the time limit is an hour..
I'm spittin 1st..
 
Old 01-18-04, 08:09 PM   #2
SyaNidal
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yo this is not my check in ill check in afta da _-EAGLES-_ game....
Pz...
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Old 01-18-04, 08:31 PM   #3
As5a5sIn5
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IIte this 'comdian' to me in no competition//
He's hillariuos thinks he's an 'emcee rippin'//
This kid's 'trippin' it's spell "visions" you already fell//
This kid could never be a 'wizard' he can't even 'spell'//
Bitch ya suck more dick that the girl on the corner//
You about about to get lyrically sacked, like kurt warner//
Cuz you wanna excel in life but you just get worse//
Did ya hear of the list of faggots, you come in first//
The only way you'll win is dick riders from wise~ways//
This faggot could never get none so he just buys~gays//(SyaNidal)
I wrote this verse a little too quick, I hate fuckin' rushin'//
This kid says he's so ill, then I'll get him some robitusson//
I'm out this fuckin' battle, you battle, and you need to stop~that//
The honest truth is emcees would rather listen to slipknot~rap//

Out
 
Old 01-18-04, 08:38 PM   #4
As5a5sIn5
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Wait Edit Needs 16 Lines Only Got 14!!!

IIte this 'comdian' to me in no competition//
He's hillariuos thinks he's an 'emcee rippin'//
This kid's 'trippin' it's spell "visions" you already fell//
This kid could never be a 'wizard' he can't even 'spell'//
Bitch ya suck more dick that the girl on the corner//
You about about to get lyrically sacked, like kurt warner//
Cuz you wanna excel in life but you just get worse//
Did ya hear of the list of faggots, you come in first//
The only way you'll win is dick riders from wise~ways//
This faggot could never get none so he just buys~gays//(SyaNidal)
I wrote this verse a little too quick, I hate fuckin' rushin'//
This kid says he's so ill, then I'll get him some robitusson//
This kid's a fuckin' joke he think he good, you winnings are the past//
I'll steal all your luck and stick that 'lucky rabbits foot' up your ass//
I'm out this fuckin' battle, you battle, and you need to stop~that//
The honest truth is emcees would rather listen to slipknot~rap//

FINAL EDIT
 
Old 01-18-04, 10:06 PM   #5
As5a5sIn5
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God Damnit!!!

Final Final Edit-

IIte this 'comdian' to me in no competition//
He's hillariuos thinks he's an 'emcee rippin'//
This kid's 'trippin' it's spelled "visions" you already fell//
This kid could never be a 'wizard' he can't even 'spell'//
Bitch ya suck more dick then that the girl on the corner//
You about about to get lyrically sacked, like kurt warner//
Cuz you wanna excel in life but you just get worse//
Did ya hear of the list of faggots, you come in first//
The only way you'll win is dick riders from wise~ways//
This faggot could never get none so he just buys~gays//(SyaNidal)
I wrote this verse a little too quick, I hate fuckin' rushin'//
This kid says he's so 'ill', then I'll get him some 'robitusson'//
This kid's a fuckin' joke he think he good, your winnings are the past//
I'll steal all your luck, and stick that 'lucky rabbits foot' up your ass//
I'm out this fuckin' battle, you battle.. and you need to stop~that//
The honest truth is emcees would rather listen to slipknot~rap//

okay....good now
 
Old 01-18-04, 10:55 PM   #6
Chris Black
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peep this battle when you guys get a chance
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107351&page=1
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Old 01-18-04, 10:57 PM   #7
SyaNidal
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From: PenNsyLvaNIa
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this kids so whack he got merked by an emcee from newark
im roastin this kid in our battle call his ass ballpark,
afraid of dark n dogs barks, attempted to ride a uni-trike(its 2 bikes...)
not to bright, for a light, give ya 3 eyes n my lines r outta sight,
he must admit defeat cauz this emcee has no fukin choice,
spittin my lyrics call me thunder the way hes scared of my voice,
he made a callout in bitch slapped and then his ass backed down,
he said wise-ways dickrides n then he road wise's dick to town...
lookin like a clown, but wit a frown, feedback is highly apreciated, (his sig open mic)
he says HIGHLY like this becauz if he gets some hes elevated,
hes so fucking stupid elevated to him means that he floats...
twistin off bottle caps of cola sayin hes been doin coke,
dead broke, no joke, kid couldnt bi-lines from ebay if he tryed, (biline-newspaper)
hes retarded so call him slow, my lines slip of my tounge n call me slide,
then slip into ya drink like syanide, you cant be an assassin wit out stealth,
you shouldnt try to fight poison... like quick sand its bad for ya health....
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Old 01-19-04, 12:02 AM   #8
Daz
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asassin wins this simply bechuz he had punches..i couldnt find any in syanide's verse..also newark does not rhyme with ballpark..newark is not pronounced New-Ark therefore it doesnt rhyme..

v/assassin

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Old 01-19-04, 12:26 AM   #9
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therefore it does rhyme and since i called dazasta a newb and i know assassin in real life and he sent me your whole convo wit jman n talkin how i suck and shit thats consaidered a hate vote no punches my fuckign ass... sorry kid learn how to read us americans say NEW-ARK...
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Old 01-19-04, 12:54 AM   #10
Daz
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ok hoe..i leave here thats not how its annunciated..not a hate vote..i dont hate you..plus i already called you out so why mess up ur battles..ur verse sucked..bottomline..and i am american moron..Newark, Nj
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Old 01-19-04, 02:05 AM   #11
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here ill rephrase that us SIMPLE people prnounce it the way we think so its NEW-ARK to me ok and probly everyone else that i no...
sorry for the inconvenionce...
uppin2... _-Pz-_
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Old 01-19-04, 04:42 AM   #12
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in werid ways this was a straight up even battle
so startin off the edits were a bother
taken lazy liberty to read both of ya's 1st verse
and WoW !!
my fav lines came form Syn so forth the vote
vote = syanadal
best punch:
he made a callout in bitch slapped and then his ass backed down,
he said wise-ways dickrides n then he road wise's dick to town...
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Old 01-19-04, 05:01 AM   #13
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Assasyn clearly won, but both were pretty good
favorite line;
Bitch ya suck more dick that the girl on the corner//
You about about to get lyrically sacked, like kurt warner//
ya fuck the rams
peace
 
Old 01-19-04, 10:39 AM   #14
SyaNidal
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lol ok herb boy/\ this kid uses football references in every battle....
and yeah talkin about sluts an shit takes no skill... yo Anthony(assassin) come up wit
a punch the doesnt refer to unoriginal shit...
naw just playing... Uppin!
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Old 01-19-04, 12:07 PM   #15
MichaelMadness
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Shit, this was a good..close battle
Punches-As5a5sIn5 hit harder w/ punches
wordplay-both were descent, But I feel As5a5sIn5 put more creativity into his shit.
Flow-basically a tie, both had there ups and downs
structure-syanidal, you gotta work on yer structure.....

V/As5a5sIn5
no beef...both of yall keep elevatin
 
 


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