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I just wrote this freestyle-- lemme know----
Yo this motha fucka be tryin to talk shit-- actin like i got time for it i dont wanna hear it and niether do you --these rhmes cant stick if they covered in glue--- i dont even know why you bother-- the truth is son i could be your father fuck that dog now ill stop-- im to embarassed to be your own pop your rhymes are patetic-- you couldnt get hot-- if i soaked you in gas and blew up that spot your lyrics are junk-- i heard them last time and damn dude it stunk not sayin you cant write new shit-- im just sayin dont cuz it aint even worth it what do you think? comments please |
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Its aight...but not great...its acceptable for a keystyle i guess...kepp tryin' dawg...check out my post 'The Critic'...peace...
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yo thanks dog
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