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reminiscing over scriptures written/
picturing Hyrogliphics of figures unliving demons attacking me so i must stay distant/ fighting to complete my lifes mission yet its hard when no one wants to listen/ writing more chapters then bibles because rivals want me to give in to a life of sin/ i want to be set free we're new heights begin/ to stare into sights an not be questioned on my own religion/ i believe in my visions an whats been told to me/ answering everyones problems an yet i wait for mine to be un-folded to me/ maybe then i can understand who an where i am really... *switch* Hyrogliphics foretell tha future of a murderer bloodshed rained ova tha belligerent era/ as tha prophetic scriptures overwhelm tha nation with mass hysteria/ pass foolish ones an leave them em' wit sicc savages/ read tha passages of three murderous cold hearted lyricist/ as I double tha count of tha departed/ I promised all witnesses lay stiff when bombarded wit tha three of me equaling tha hardest/ deadly departure if u fools wasnt ready then why u start for?/ why'd you ever come near tha darkness if you asking where's tha light stored/ ive indured injuries from battles fault lyrically/ metamorphosis takes it's place with sicc an murderous until we manifest metamorphically/ telepathically i set things it motion/ wether minds or current in tha ocean/ exposing ones strength/ an exploding thoughts touching all with a intellectual sense/ for tha others fold-in because of their physical form/ it aint strong enough for the tribological storm/ born into a swarm of confused minds intwine/ an combind all blood lines eventually growin horns an burn until tha end of time.... Last edited by CyKoShYnE : 07-18-02 at 02:59 PM. |
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shit flowed nice as hell easy to read im not gunna qoute cause im tired i like the begining good use of vocab blah blah peep im back(bitch)
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DAMN...YOU ON SOME NEW SHIT...THIS WAS PRETTY IMPRESSIVE FOR YA FIRST DROP...KEEP DOIN YA THING, PLAYA
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DAMN THAT SHIT WAS NICE SON...WAS MOS DEF FEELIN IT
KEEP SPITTIN AIGHT PLAYA -1- |
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NICE PIECE
KEEP IT UP HOLLA |
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Quote:
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damn this is a pure piece of lyrical phatness, fosho playa, keep spittin
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This is nice, vocab and knowledge was explored, nice wordplay and imagery put through this... I didnt like how ya formatted the verse, space ya bars out, its more easier to read and follow, but thats a minor... The rhythm was on point, the multies kept syllable nice, some internal rhymes I noticed... The wordplay and vocab combined bought some imagery together, knowledge words were well used and described, I was feeling it... Got lost on where you were going sometimes, more substance to your verse woulda made this flawless, you got a good style, hope ta see more of your work in the future... Feeling this, keep dropping the gems...
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uppin this master~piece
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uppin
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ThA BaDmAn Is HeRe NoW
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hottness man, deep too, im feelin it. keep spittin.
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uppin an old peice
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