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Old 02-10-05, 04:18 PM   #1
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Old 02-10-05, 05:52 PM   #2
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pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 05:52 PM.
 
Old 02-10-05, 05:59 PM   #3
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homey you better drop by like tomorrow cuz u saw me say i'd drop in a day and thats what im doin.
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Old 02-10-05, 06:04 PM   #4
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yea i prolly wont drop till 2morrow or saturday...
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Old 02-10-05, 06:07 PM   #5
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ya aint wack just cuz u in SM or cuz you a fake queer bitch its…
cuz your lines are more played out than Shakespeare’s skriptz
u couldn’t be part “untouchable” if you were a 97,98 bulls fan
cuz ya verse is still out of touch with talent like the NBA stands
If my verse was like yours I would wish I was dead
So don’t just feel bad……….go and hang your head
Your drop’z only “exciting” becuz your sig’z flexin them cheekz
Now after reading it I know why your skript ends in them z’zzz
I know my verse was shit, but this is skript… why come crunch?
people try takin shots at who’s on top, so I didn’t throw a punch
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Old 02-10-05, 06:35 PM   #6
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Old 02-10-05, 06:52 PM   #7
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When you get this loss, it will just be one of my devastating creations
Never really heard of you, but, oblivion seems to best describe your reputation
Look kid, I could flip my record, and this you couldn’t top it, not one bit
Since you always hopping around like lil C.A.L.I., shit, go hop on his dick*
And I thought my drop was bad, yeah, until I looked at pictureperfect’s verse
Please, you can’t beat me, compare my punches to yours but you came worst
Take a look at your punches, they’re isn’t none, that’s something you lack
This herb isn’t going to go anywhere, so I guess he’s stuck on being wack
Look bitch your text is like plastic knifes kid, it never seems to penetrate
Those L’s in your battle record, is practically the only thing that elevate

*lil C.A.L.I. AKA Nemesis, Scene and Dopium

don’t get the punches, etc…don’t vote then
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Old 02-11-05, 02:01 PM   #8
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When you get this loss, it will just be one of my devastating creations
Never really heard of you, but, oblivion seems to best describe your reputation
the words dnt qute rhyme...gd punch..decnt concept-7.5/10
Look kid, I could flip my record, and this you couldn’t top it, not one bit
Since you always hopping around like lil C.A.L.I., shit, go hop on his dick*
lol, gd humour, nice punch...used the bar well, gd flow -8.5/10
And I thought my drop was bad, yeah, until I looked at pictureperfect’s verse
Please, you can’t beat me, compare my punches to yours but you came worst
feeding.....decent punch,flow and vocab on point-8/10
Take a look at your punches, they’re isn’t none, that’s something you lack
This herb isn’t going to go anywhere, so I guess he’s stuck on being wack
ill wordplay, hard hitting punch, very nice flow -8.5/10
Look bitch your text is like plastic knifes kid, it never seems to penetrate
Those L’s in your battle record, is practically the only thing that elevate
hella tigh closer, concept was creative, gd wordplay,nice flow and hard punch -9.5/10

Pictureperfect: work on your structure and flow.....maybe write to a beat i dunno, ur drop jus felt disjointed and choppy...deres no point going for personals if their shit like the 1s u used man.no h8...one thing i can raise you on is ur creative punches they werent particulairly hard hittin but inventive and show potential..work on ur flow and structure and personlas and combine it wid ur creativity and ull b heavy

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Old 02-11-05, 02:43 PM   #9
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aight thanks for the honest vote...
uppin this piece
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Old 02-11-05, 06:33 PM   #10
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uppin this.....
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Old 02-11-05, 11:28 PM   #11
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uupin this shit
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Old 02-12-05, 05:12 PM   #12
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uppin this battle
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Old 02-12-05, 08:50 PM   #13
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uppin this shit
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Old 02-12-05, 09:57 PM   #14
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pictureperfect:
yo man that was dope but you just didnt have it enough like your vocab was weak but you had tight stucture and flow very well actually the punches were dope and the creativty was there it was all dope but you lacked vocab and multis so you lost it from that...no hate

Skriptz:
the reason im giving you this is cuz of your punches but also cuz you had dope ass vocab and multis real ncie punches hands down and the stucture and flow was great fuckin dope verse the punches were alot doper them pictures i felt yours alot more...pz

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Old 02-12-05, 11:52 PM   #15
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A'ight...this was an okay battle...I dont really read text battles anymore...

PP2...you came wit some okay punches...flow and structure was on point, seemed sorta half-assed to me...decent vocab, decent verse overall...I have seen better from you...

Skriptz...you came with harder punches...flow and structure is on point as well, and you had a personal in there...not the best I have seen from you...but I think you got this for better punches...no hate.
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