word up..... mixtape opener. unlike A LOT of mofos on RV I WILL rtf.


Intro: Triple_N
First verse: SPuL
Hook: SPuL
Second verse: SPuL
Outro: Triple_N
Beat: Anno Domini beats

www.soundclick.com/spul

LINKS:
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234152\
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233943

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Listenin'...feelin the beat...feelin the intro from trip...ya vocals a lil low but come in real energetic..got the jumpy delivery..flow is hot..lyrics decent too..breath control are nice...hook is the best part of this track...quality is hot...nice verses b...feelin the outro...9.2/10...hot jawn..downloaded

yo fam is it possible fo u to feed on both tracks i got up in the sig plz..thanks b..1

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....suck a dick faggot.....

Most presence ive heard from you period yep them vocalz are to lowreal solid shit here mayne......hook is pure butta ....yea this beat is definately slammin ........yea the lil trizzip outro was real tight ......yea def liked this shit alot keep em on fiya

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^yea, appreciate the feed from both of y'all. thanks yo. and word I RTF on tose tracks.

uppp

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damn lovin this intro
not really feelin the beat, aint my steez but you come in nice on it
best i heard from ya spul, presence seems alot better, same delivery just w/ a bit more emotion this time. flow's different, on point though. multies out the ass, nothin wrong w/ this at all so far. hook's catchy, likin this shit. oh damn, trip comes in.....damn, everything on point, wut more can you say? this nigga's sick as fuck, even on a fuckin outro lol

hmmm.....can you say, downloaded?

think u could rtf on these 2 tracks for me....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234149
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233918

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Listenen' heard this beat i actually got it like it..

Intro dope

1st: Spul nice persence, good delivery ur lyrics is always kickin dog...like this shit... kicked flow
HoOk: Not the best ive heard from you but catchy in a sense
2nd: Better son lol u killed this one man...liked ur energy like your concept...real cocky....
HOok: Same
Outro: LIl to much wit tha pppppppp but the other than that prophet in a pocket is dope like the outro for the most part

Over-all
I aint see shit wrong wit the mixin man it all sounded on point everything from beat to vocals to ur ab-libs ur dubs all that shit son was on point...the only i didnt like that much was the whole "papapapapapa" for the prophet in a pocket at the end for the outro not that outro wasnt hot but it coulda used less of that...feel me...but over-all homeboy 8.5/10 like that shit holla at yo boy an keep it 100

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^aiight appreciate the feed. and tony I got you yo. gotta finish madden online. then i got you

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aiight RTF to all tracks. upppp

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i like this beat.

the intro is hot. with the addition of triple n it makes it sound so much better.


the first verse u come in with energy. i like the way u jump on this beat. u switch up your flow a little. maybe u could up your vocals a little

chorus is cool. i like that "put the hip in the hop" part

second verse sounds somewhat the same as the first. nothing stood out too much lyrically



overall this song was honestly real cool. one of the best i've heard lately on RV. u better thanks triple cause he basically made this song go from around a 7 to maybe a 9 or 10


so good job

^word appreciate the feedback y'all.upp

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intro is coo...like it...

never been big on annos beats....theres a few of em that i love..but for the most part...i dont feel em that much....

your vocals seem low...they need to be raised a lil....but your delivery on this is nice...hook is coo...

nothin i can really say except for the vocals being a lil low...

outro is coo....overall pretty nice track man..keep it up

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