u made the rules im settin up. this is my checc in

at first i was coo wich ya u seemd polite so i kinda liked ya//now u wanna fuk wit tha big dog so i gotta bite ya//
i spit wit heat tha flame jus might light ya--so watch ya feet//tha grounds gettin took from right undaneath ya sneeks//
that rap shit u spits old like an antique compared ta mah technique ur styles obsolete//lemme do dis net thug wit control alt delete//
u can now proceed ta walk tha plank get yanked by mah chrome shank body stankin worse than some dank//got u lookin stupider then forest gump playd by tom hanks//
ur nowhere close ta mah ranks--decrease ya flows//finna be a TKO from direct punchline blows//
as far as this batle goes i suppose i wont expose this bitch in mans clothes//but ima take tha win from right under his nose//
nigga u shoulda thought first bout how well u could spit//cuz u couldnt fuk wit me if i taped a pussy whole ta ya dick//
battlin me u must be outta ya mind//so ima put u bak in ya place startin wit ya spine here u can borrow bar 9//
anybody who gets a bitch slap from this nigga jus politely decline hes a waist of time he gots lyrics that dont rhyme//step bak into tha trenches and get off tha front line//

you act like ur verse is a work of art but fuck it imma fuckin pick it apart//
show you faggots how your flows flawed from da start//
how da fuck am i meant to fear your bite dogg if this is your bark?//
like a shark wit no teeth this shits childs-play not beef//
My records 0-1, but it ain't no losing streak//
so don't go thinkin' that my careers gone and peaked//
cos this time imma get more attention than that bitch J-Lo if she streaked//
you wanna spit gainst' me?//
well lets see you hit that note when i'm standin' in front of you rippin' out yo throat//
i hope you can float nigga cos like Murder Inc ur about to sink//
this is da sorta shit that'll make ur balls shrink//
Suicidal you must be, cos this fucking verse is homacidal//
my skills gonna numb your brain so much they'll put you in an insane asylum//
suicide, my words will poison your mind like cyanide//
it's time for my 1st rap battle homicide my advice to y'all? simple HIDE//

ah fuck man i jus noticed your verse is the same as da shit you spat against flesh n bone what happened there??
but you gotta know man i had to spit theres no way i could be beaten by not showing
no dis intended i had to
peace

you fuckin recycled..?? why would you do that?

you must have no skill..

go away herb...fagget

my vote goes to kru...he didnt bite

also he freestyles not uses the same prewritten you lost to before

hit dis up honesly

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=84964

pCe

thanks grim maybe when you get one hundred posts you'll hit back at this and vote before da poll closes.................. ..................................

ok if the other bitch bited well ok no biting bitch, if you wouldn,t have bited the vote would of been to you cuz you had more punches and multies and the flow would of been good in audio but ok my vote then goes automatically to krucial

vote= Kru-cial

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the vote on this shit definitely goes to kru-cial better wordplay all round
punches links flows i jus cant believe everyone else is sleeping on this shit how the fuck are us newbies meant to get fuckin records going if no nigga votes?????

kru-cail won this............

Break down:

Flow:Suicidal
Structure:Suicidal
Punches:Kru
Wordplay:Kru


Punches win battles so I give this to Kru-cial

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hit his up:



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=p.stylez

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yo this is ancient
i forgot all bout da shit till i back tracked through da pages
so fuck it mighty as well up it
uppin for votes y'all
possible wins a win haha

suicidals flow was great, but both were tight, S was only slightly above krucial.... but in terms of lyrics, wordplay, punches and all that shit, krucial takes this..... structure was similar, altho im tempted to go on suicidals side on that.... so it would be a close tie, but ima give this to krucial cos his wordplay was better than suicidals, i was feelin it to the fullest...

vote = Kru-cial

alrite cool still uppin y'all
don't sleep on this ne more lets see some votes
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