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Old 09-20-06, 06:35 PM   #1
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Do You Realize? (First drop, check it)

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Do you realize the coldest thing burns you
Do you realize your destiny doesn't concern you
Do you realize at night you walk a little faster
Do you realize sunshine gives you cancer
Do you realize turning nothing to something isn't anything
Do you realize noone thinks of turning something to everything
Do you realize all haters love too
Do you realize some lovers hate you
Do you realize your words are stronger then the weapon
Do you realize non New Yorkers died on 9/11
Do you realize the ones that won't hurt you are the ones you blow off
Do you realize that when your most on you tend to show off
Do you realize most talk just to make a sound
Do you realize when you fall down you get a little higher off the ground
Do you realize when you throw a punch your only as smart as your fist
Do you realize when your not being real you don't even exist
Do you realize to have sex you don't even have to kiss
Do you realize this ain't a vet but someone new droppin this

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Old 09-20-06, 07:10 PM   #2
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Old 09-26-06, 12:50 PM   #3
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this was original i'll give you that much. it could have been a lot better if you expanded on it shawty. every one of the lines in this joint seemed to mean alot to you which is good.
you got a nice flow and some good wordplay in there.

be easy shawty, holla at my shit, its in the sig....
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