Battle Rules

No Crew Votes
No Swaying
No Fucken HAters
10 LInes Max!!!!.. Go over your Dq'ed

Does not Matter who spits First..

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 07:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed for asking for votes in LL

$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 07:38 PM.

Before I even Post, From the Callout I already Win
abolishing yah text, like i just cutted and Posted it in the Recycle Bin!
These words are All over yah self, LIke we were Conjoined Twins!
From the Second i Begin, Iam Banging on yah Credit, Like yah Next Of KIN*
The Fire Within, Shines through, yah Structure is Unstable like a Bowling Pin!
Wit this amputation Of this Newb, Use Me as Inspiration
Think about this annihilation, and continue wit ya vocational rehabilitation*


vocational rehabilitation- training in a specific trade with the aim of gaining employment

Next Of KIn - the person who is (or persons who are) most closely related to a given person( as in His MOm )

Eclipsik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 09:52 PM.

How you get off callin' ya self the $Wordman$/
Oh I get it, you TWICE as ugly as Birdman/

Your words bland to the eloquence that I type/
You winnin? Must've got a hold of the crack pipe/

Doin' Sub-Zero fatalities on this fool/
Freez 'em into a block then break 'em into two/

Beamin' on 'em hotter than the sun in Baton Rouge/
You a fakin' fool, desperate like homeless takin' jewels/

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uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WTF can we get some votes so this can get closed and I can finally get on with other battles without getting banned?

Voted For: $ Wordman $

Both were wack
vote goes to wordman for better punches that werent basic and he has good personals also he had not good structure and his flow was kinda off

eclipsk to basic and it wasnt hard hitting

Vote wordman

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Please vote in my future battle

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Voted For: $ Wordman $

more complex drop n better thought out punches decent flow structure needed a bit of work but overall jus a stronger verse..opener n closer were the best lines in the whole battle...E:try n get more complex with your punches all you threw jus missed cause they werent personal or hardhitting at all...

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