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04-29-08, 07:42 PM | #1 | ||||||
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A Call to Duty
IP: B286 136D
Bear wit me, i havnt droped an OM literally in years. and all my OM's are more to a poetic and slow spoken tempo to explain the lenght of the lines
his brains leakin from rewriting twelve verses wit the same meaning cause the game needs it, to release it from the plight of a caged pehonix repetetive artist, wit hit makin schemes that follow the same sequence hip hop's too powerful to die, but im sure that the games bleedin incarcerated in a memory, flash backs of a golden age pre coccaine pop culture references that outdate words on page when ability reigned supreme over subconscience subliminal tactics and a poetic devotion to scripture resided over criminal antics when verses were potent enough to earn respect of a biblical standard beef wasnt a political stunt, it was more so a lyrical mandate our nation was open to anyone with a story, no need to meet a prerequisite years before it wast devoured by carbon copys of dead executives...yes we should draft a syllabus to eradicate the ignorant let em know every snap that we hear in a track just agrivates militant are we considering trading our rock roots for fast cars and hot shoes we own the country, but use our power to tell them to cop boost or the latest sean john, we're sellin our heritage for cotton we turned R.I.P into a fashion statement, it no longer merits the forgotten and if i swear that i myself are not apart of the problem im lying in the same track i've threatened lives and thanked the god im defying a cristian with agnostic views that ask you not to choose but to make a selection on which part of hip hop you do the hipper side, fueled by fads and many eras each year or the ones that hops to the occasion to teach the planet of fear, love, and other emotions to be artistically written to properly display a gift to be linquistically given so we can rise above the plain, and becom metaphysically lifted or you can disolve into the flame and become part of history's blemish
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04-29-08, 07:45 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: B286 136D
Just to let yall know. im not really a fan of the whole hip hop is dying movement. in fact, if given long periods of time i like the occasional snap music song. but i was listenin to an old fugees tape (yes i said tape) and ended up writing this in like 15 minutes. so please leave honest feedback. i take constructive criticism well, as we all should
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=246133 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=246128 will leave feed on more in time. i hate feeling like i only left it to drop
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04-29-08, 09:28 PM | #3 | |||||
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^^^thats what im talkin' bout. good job brutha...good job indeed.
i enjoyed your drop, it was very refreshing to say the least brutha. your flow was consistent, your vocab was sufficient, plus you stayed on topic and made a coherant point about your current thoughts on the game. there were some minor flaws, but overall: efficient piece cutty. you did what you came here to do, which was drop a nice and tasty little gem that i like to call "o.m. worthy". with that said....make sure you listen to your "fugees" tape as often as possible, lol. shit, this is the type of material crhyme sin can be proud of....hell, you could be the type of artist that crhyme sin is lookin' for. who knows??? without knowing your exact specifics (r.v. history and such), you got my vote for crhyme membership...unless i find out some random bullshit that makes you unworthy in my eyes. we need a few good men/die hard crhyme loyalists. i guess we'll see what r-ev and mister think about you before we move forward with this subject. good luck friend. keep up the good work. the supervillain of crhyme
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04-29-08, 10:10 PM | #4 | ||||
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impressed....your poetic side doesn't show as much as i thought it would, but a good read nonetheless one of the best pieces i've seen drop'd so far besides me lol and my C.S. Brethren, your vocabulary is on point and your imagry is pretty decent not too estatic about your emotion but it was above average so to speak, props on the drop, structure is very different the line length isn't what's different its the word usage and scheme that's impressingly awkward.
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05-08-08, 11:09 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: EEE4 3BF8
real deep message good drop, liked the wordplay in the beggining.you expressed how you feel about things are overall,it was a real good read i give it 8/10 i was impressed.
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07-22-08, 11:18 AM | #6 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 56DB FD7C
Damn man this was actually fucking sick, Nice vocab, nice topic love it, the flow was on point, pretty good drop for an OM, I dont really like readin OM's but this one was captivating, keep dropin homie!
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