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10-10-04, 08:03 PM | #1 | |||||||
bingo!
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Poet-iKal........... join up..!!
IP: A0DC A88A
you can be in any crew..this will be like a poetic dream team..u can specialize in poetry topical poetry audio topical audio
leader:shadow co-leader: abstrakt topical: appocalypse topical: str8hood topical: hope topical: nostradamus poetry leader: valor no matter what crew u from were fam here
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10-10-04, 08:05 PM | #2 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 8FB6 AEBF
So are you leaving AI ?
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10-10-04, 08:32 PM | #3 | |||
-BTR-
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
oh damn. thats all i got to say. well check my link in my sig and tell me how bad i suck
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10-10-04, 08:46 PM | #4 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: A0DC A88A
no im not leaviong AI its a topical crew u can be in an y crew u want and be in thsi crew at the same time
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10-10-04, 10:18 PM | #5 | |||||||
Above All Else
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IP: 3A63 EE3E
lol..only if u say im good then im in!!! (dno't forget to get on ur knees and beg please!!) and no im not kidding lol
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10-10-04, 10:18 PM | #6 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
poetry.......
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10-10-04, 10:23 PM | #7 | |||||||
Above All Else
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IP: 3A63 EE3E
They are both the same ^
well kinda.. and plz don't explain how they are different valor.. lol
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10-10-04, 10:30 PM | #8 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
no i was sayin let me in
u idiot
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10-10-04, 10:41 PM | #9 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 8FB6 AEBF
Yeah ok. Should be fun.
You can add me if you want to. |
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10-11-04, 12:57 AM | #10 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 64D3 E6A7
This is my FIRST ever topical, it was in an in crew battle, it was my first so ya, bad structure and no vocab, so next time I will have better structure and vocab, but just tell me if this is enough to get in
TOPIC: FINDING OUT YOUR ADOPTED School's over, i'm on my way to a friend's house, gonna hang out by her pool/ I get pushed into the water, as they laugh i feel like a fool, but we friends so it's cool/ So as time progresses, I call my dad to pick me up, the day has ended/ He arrives, I get into the car, see a sad look on his face, there's tension i can feel it/ Arrive home, walk in the living room, saw my mom, she had a look that was debating/ Couldn't tell whether i was in trouble or she was, I was still wondering, contemplating/ She asked me to have a seat, and said " There's something that we gotta do "/ " Me and your dad have kept a secret, but we think you're finally old enough to tell you "/ She hesitated, thought a bit, then said " Honey, you are adopted "/ " We got you at an orphanage when you were a one year old kid "/ Faint memories appear of a family that used to be, how could my real parents just abandon me?/ I'm lost in my mind, overwhelmed by a blinding anger, I can barely see/ I burst into tears and yell " how could you not have told me this before, how! "/ As I rushed to my room, i turn and shout " how the hell am i supposed to call you mom now? "/ I begin to resolve my dilema, these are the people who raised me, my real mom and i love her/ All of a sudden i start to choke, as i think " if i'm adopted, what about my sister? "/ |
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10-11-04, 01:03 AM | #11 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
add me im a poetry guy... i love to write shit bout gurls n shit..you feel..? heres a verse from a collab with still remain..Song: Its Love
When people reach out to ask for a date… Its hard to be on time and not be late… Some guys try to write rap songs or poetry… To get there respect and love from there one to be… Sometimes I just say whats up how are you today… Some people just get nervous and just say hey… If I had to I would smother you by giving you all my admiration… Now that I have raised the sparks, I hit my destination… Love is a big word, say it and if you don’t mean-it… Your person friend might not enjoy it, and you’ll be forced to submit… Most people don’t get married for love, but just for the money… Love is more like when people try to make each other laugh, its funny… Workin every damn day, us men come home to relax… And then we find are girls cheating on us, look I know the facts… Some people just say rude words and think there being sarcastic… But no it feels like there chucking hard chunks of plastic… They think it don’t hurt are feelings, they think were like elastic… Love is when you don’t have to act in someone else’s situation… Stand back give them room to breathe, now theres time for relaxation… |
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10-11-04, 01:06 AM | #12 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
i want in valor beat me 5-4 with his dr votes i shouldve won though
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10-11-04, 01:13 AM | #13 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
NO
u beef to much
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10-11-04, 01:14 AM | #14 | ||||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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this isnt a crew you dick
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10-11-04, 01:17 AM | #15 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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what about me was that a no? or you dont know?
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