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02-22-06, 08:02 PM | #1 | ||||||
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walk away
IP: 0825 899A
this was originally a collab but i changed it up....this is jsut a lil trakk i put together, its called "walk away"
LINKS feed left: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...7237post2667237 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...7241post2667241 link to song page: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=468135 |
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02-22-06, 08:37 PM | #2 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
betas not my thing but..it's nice....hype shit......quality is pritty good...you sound young...u got nice flow....adlibs is nice...presence n emotion is hot....
good job on this man...nice shit..hollidy line was nice too.. stay up man 1nE
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02-23-06, 12:39 AM | #3 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 16CF 9642
*litsening as I type*
I'm liking this man. Flow is tight.....so are the punches. This is an all around good track man.....keep it up ™
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02-23-06, 01:23 AM | #4 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
the beat is nice ...clean...little production tricks..panning the scratch in the beginning ......!
i dont know where youre comin from ...you sound good ...as far as what youre rapping about..i would have to say you are 14 -16 years old...but you are on point...stay on the beats well...it has flow .... good job...keep it up ...!
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02-24-06, 01:29 PM | #5 | |||
OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
beat is coo
flow is standard...nothing major one way or the other need more presence in your voice and/or production not bad dawg 1 |
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02-25-06, 01:36 PM | #6 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 4F84 8C0F
Listening...
Beat is decent...not really feeling it. Quality is pretty good. Flow...is ehh...it's on beat but it's pretty basic. Delivery is up and down...some points it's good, but it sounds lacking in other spots. Lyrics are pretty good. Definetely with work you can be good. Keep it up. |
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02-26-06, 02:30 AM | #7 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 2E10 B467
dope track...
emotion is dope Quality is pretty good overall good track homie, word
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02-26-06, 04:42 AM | #8 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 822B DB1E
your voice is good, u got a great enthusiastic/pretty much professional rapping voice even tho u sound fairly young, and your flow is great and suits the instrumental well
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02-26-06, 11:45 PM | #9 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 4939 723D
nice track nice Flow ur pretty Good u Flow like my boi Illness nice quality get at me one day for a Collab aight? ahhaa o and on the track u left me feed on i didnt think i needed emotion since its a lyrical track but thankz for the Feedback
nice shit tho keep it up aght
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02-27-06, 07:05 AM | #10 | ||||||
Herb
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IP: 5773 B703
aiight first off U sound mad young its kinda distracting,,.,,beats pretty nice flows above average very smooth lyrics r average content come up lyrics could be tightened up somewhat U got a lil swag and cockyness thats good and the emotion is good thats a plus there alone just work on uppin ya content and come a lil more agressive
feed used 2/27 "H1p Hop (Beat by Wez Nilez)" Last edited by will appear : 02-27-06 at 11:56 AM. |
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