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Tekneek | 5 | 100.00% | |
Pen N' Paper | 0 | 0% | |
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06-22-05, 11:09 AM | #1 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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Tekneek vs Pen N' Paper
IP: 0D11 88C9
Battle Rules:
1 day to check or asap 1 hour to drop afta check 6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 06-23-05 at 11:09 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Closed. Forfeit |
06-22-05, 11:30 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 11:30 AM.
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06-22-05, 11:45 AM | #3 | |
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IP: B1A5 868C
Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 11:45 AM.
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06-22-05, 11:57 AM | #4 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
This guys technique for rappin is just copy and paste Tekneek dont win he just PM for votes, man he a waste Man the only way ull win is if he used his birthday wishes for wishin Man ill cut ur hopes and dreams wit certain precision like a circumcision U hide ur real skill like a bald man in denial who wears a fuckin toupee Ill leave ur tekneek dead wit one spray, he’ll be losin in any other way U Got a 3-0 record and ima bout to give him his first loss to his rec. U aint capable of goin against me newbie so next time just get it correct
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
06-22-05, 12:07 PM | #5 | |
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
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IP: B1A5 868C
not my best as i rushed it but should stil be enough.....i hope?
First taste of real gladiator, serve him like irate wasted waiters, end up with 10 digits on your face like basic calculators… Tek call's out all imitators, you ‘outta line’ like ‘illiterate narrators’ and couldn’t catch a beat packin rhyme defibrillators. Hope ya religious, it over before its finished,.u can’t win this, cuz Tek throw shots puttin death on this bitches wish list.. You just miss kid, and Tek leave ya showered wit disses, it could be your birthday and you still couldn’t come gifted… Bring wack spits and get ripped with apocalyptic tactics, show him the end is near like naive Vietnam draft pics… Rhymes is plastic, kid ain’t severe, he anti-climatic, bitch couldn’t ‘match up’ sparkin phosphorous fabrics… This tha true test, tek chew vets and leave crews vexed, beat ya dome with texts and leave em wit loose necks This fools next, show who’s best when head smacks through chest, left this kid noddin like he was sayin ooh-yes…
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06-22-05, 12:31 PM | #6 | |
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
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IP: ECB3 36A0
again sorry bout the line count.......good battle though............
lets get these votes in
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06-22-05, 02:11 PM | #7 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
ok uppin this for votes cmon people dont sleep now....lol
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
06-22-05, 02:35 PM | #8 |
B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
Voted For: Pen N' Paper
Tight battle checkin tha pollz.................... Vote removed
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06-22-05, 02:36 PM | #9 |
B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
shit... again my bad I clicked on post vote....... shit
sorry bout that!
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06-22-05, 07:09 PM | #10 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this cmon pplz lets get this closed uppin 4 votes
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
06-22-05, 07:31 PM | #11 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CF73 089A
Voted For: Tekneek
First taste of real gladiator, serve him like irate wasted waiters, end up with 10 digits on your face like basic calculators… Tek call's out all imitators, you ‘outta line’ like ‘illiterate narrators’ and couldn’t catch a beat packin rhyme defibrillators. ^^Well...Okay I guess Hope ya religious, it over before its finished,.u can’t win this, cuz Tek throw shots puttin death on this bitches wish list.. You just miss kid, and Tek leave ya showered wit disses, it could be your birthday and you still couldn’t come gifted… ^^Birthday/christmas and gifted shit is played Bring wack spits and get ripped with apocalyptic tactics, show him the end is near like naive Vietnam draft pics… Rhymes is plastic, kid ain’t severe, he anti-climatic, bitch couldn’t ‘match up’ sparkin phosphorous fabrics… ^^^Ok.....didn't hit This tha true test, tek chew vets and leave crews vexed, beat ya dome with texts and leave em wit loose necks This fools next, show who’s best when head smacks through chest, left this kid noddin like he was sayin ooh-yes… ^^well....didn't hit Main problem with your verse was that it lacked hard hittin punches.Ur flow was beautiful but punches lacked.Nice structure too.WAt ya need is some werdplay or metas.Keep werkin....punches will come.I did see u had some decent similies. This guys technique for rappin is just copy and paste Tekneek dont win he just PM for votes, man he a waste ^^If he PM for votes...he'd get banned,weak punch Man the only way ull win is if he used his birthday wishes for wishin Man ill cut ur hopes and dreams wit certain precision like a circumcision ^^^Flowed nice....but didn't hit hard U hide ur real skill like a bald man in denial who wears a fuckin toupee Ill leave ur tekneek dead wit one spray, he’ll be losin in any other way ^^OK U Got a 3-0 record and ima bout to give him his first loss to his rec. U aint capable of goin against me newbie so next time just get it correct ^^OK.....mediocre Ur shit was basic and weak.You came hard against me in open mic.....but wat happened here?Hopefully this was keyed.MAin problem wit ur verse was that you ain't have werdplay or metas.Not even a similie.You were bassically stain stuff...gotta be indirect. Vote-Tekneek(vote in link below homie) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851 |
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06-23-05, 12:30 AM | #12 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
i kno its late but uppin for more votes plz thnx u
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
06-23-05, 11:34 AM | #13 | |
[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
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IP: ECB3 36A0
uppin this bitch............................................. ...................................
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06-23-05, 12:07 PM | #14 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
ok lets get sum more votes here cmon hott battle votes plz
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
06-23-05, 07:36 PM | #15 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this fo votes lets go pplz votes plz
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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