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Old 08-03-07, 01:30 AM   #1
Thelivingsped
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Sick Of It

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I don’t see what you mean,
Is it fun to rap being nothing more then a wet dream?
All pimped out with chains and bling,
Death in this industry is a brand new thing.
In this world, you wanna rock,
End up as the worlds next 2pac,
So many singles, a good writer but no shock,
That you get laid out and shot,
Hit the ground like a fish and begin to flop.
You see? I’m rapping without ‘cappin’ an ass’ same as the next line,
Is it cool to live through a life of crime?
Tell me this, do you want to live like this:
All talk and rhyme but no wits.
Gangster isn’t the way to go,
Chains clattering as you jump at your show.
Now show me if you could do something like this,
Rapping with skill but without the risk,
If you can see, the today’s rappers are better off slitting their wrist,
Are you catching my gist?
Can you see that most of these ‘rappers’
Have about the skill of candy bar wrappers.
Why can’t you give up the golden grills,
Put down you cheap laughs and thrills.
And be the rapper, the one you play the part,
These rappers aren’t that that good and their rhymes are tart.
I’m sick of it all,
All these gangster rappers soon will fall.
Did you hear? They call me D-money,
and you 'gangster rappers' have long since been funny.

Last edited by Thelivingsped : 08-03-07 at 01:34 AM.
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Old 08-05-07, 09:33 AM   #2
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not bad could be worked on a little more...the concept was nice.....i say improve a little on your vocab and make it smoother .....keep writing ~1~
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