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Daubs MySpace

here...........................

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oh yea, im going somewhere around 20 so dropped before me if that's too many for you

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20 is cool imma post early, so i dont have to worry about it later.

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only had time for 10

post early? bs, no showin again? guess history really does repeat itself.....

It’s been done, odds are against you, shit ima don
Dog you pale in comparison...betta hit up the tanning salon
Every time I drop niggas hate, ain’t no biggie, but THIS dude..
Had dickriders from RM off top, so wtf is YOUR excuse?
Beatin me? Bitch please, you’re just like lingerie in thought
Hoes FINALLY put you on.....just for you to get taken off
15 years old? I see I’m battling kids now, well guess what..
Yung impression, you really need to man the fuck up
Stop with the bull shit, talkin bout makin dollas n shit
Sayin he gonna jump off.........n we all hope it’s a cliff

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you look stupid sayin that shit. but foreal cuzin, im not tryna be a hater.
y would you call'em a mismatch, when kid KO'd ya ass a few days later.
on ya myspace. see a pic of ya girl, its cool u happy wit the girl u found.
but DAMN!!, her mustache is more darker than ya myspace background.
this kid is too wack. so stop postin fam, u bringin this league rep down.
nobody can Make Veli Train, if they could, he'll be betta than he is now.
always wanted a girl to cum in his face. i dunno, he wanted the chance.
ya girl is indian, so the only way'll get liquid on ya face, if she rain dance.
you signed up. ya got yaself in this situation, your the only one to blame.
only reason why some predicted u, is just the creativtiy of your first name.


thanks for showing,

P.S- im 16 <----hope its not swayin...lol...pz

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nah, s' not swayin, u still young to me tho lol

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Beatin me? Bitch please, you’re just like lingerie in thought
Hoes FINALLY put you on.....just for you to get taken off
Stop with the bull shit, talkin bout makin dollas n shit
Sayin he gonna jump off.........n we all hope it’s a cliff

VS.

on ya myspace. see a pic of ya girl, its cool u happy wit the girl u found.
but DAMN!!, her mustache is more darker than ya myspace background.
this kid is too wack. so stop postin fam, u bringin this league rep down.
nobody can Make Veli Train, if they could, he'll be betta than he is now.


Both of you dropped some weak bullshit. I was nice enough to quote something though, but the bars I did quote were still a bit 'eh'. You both could do a lot better, most the concepts were old.. there were no decent flips on them and to me it is like Maks dropped an "I can't be fucked with anything" kind of verse. Yung Impression... you had a couple of nice concepts... although your wording threw me off a lot. You really do need to work on that because even though they don't come across as stretched bars from a glance... the bars in this battle, and last week and in the cypher.. when I read them a lot of them I always end up thinking "this just sounds choppy to fuck"... it may just be me of course.

Anyway, overall Maks had a better verse so....

V/ - Makeveli Trained

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lol at i cant be fucked w/ anything type of verse. but yea soon as LLL's over it'll be all good once again
thanx for votin

bump

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^^up this shit...

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