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Old 10-09-05, 11:28 PM   #1
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Vaskez vs. Makeveli Trained

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Check Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday

(Due dates are eastern time)

Read the Rules thread if you are unsure about them..
 
Old 10-10-05, 07:56 AM   #2
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checkin in. Who the hell are you? hehe
let's drop early Mak, if we can
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-10-05, 09:00 PM   #3
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Bah, forget waiting for you to check in....


I'll make ya bleed with a kick, ya weaker than shit, while I'm meaner and sick
They say you are what you eat, and you're always seen as a dick
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-11-05, 02:54 PM   #4
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hehehe, hey vasky
i'll drop in a few
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Old 10-11-05, 03:02 PM   #5
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ha, this'll be fun..........

He may be my fam, but i still say FUCK YOU...ya not clever
Truth is, ya only purpose in the crew is recruitin newer members
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Old 10-11-05, 03:03 PM   #6
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Perhaps you should explain that we're in the same crew on RB
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And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-11-05, 04:59 PM   #7
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^^^^well yea, you pretty much just said it for me lol
but yea, we both in AM....i kinda hinted at it in the set up but yea, w/e
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Old 10-11-05, 06:38 PM   #8
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As dope as AM is, I'm not sure everyone on here knows us...but they will hehehe
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-11-05, 07:24 PM   #9
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wow...weak battle but vote vaskez for adding creativity on his verse
 
Old 10-11-05, 07:30 PM   #10
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lol SOMEBODY didn't get punches why do you guys even bother? but thanks for the vote 1-0
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-11-05, 08:31 PM   #11
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ACTUALLY READ MY FEEDBACK CUZ I'M TRYING TO HELP YOU HOES.

ok, I was not impressed here.

Vaskez - Your line was PLAYED AS FUCK. And I HATE played lines. I saw you do a lot better in Jr. son. (Don't take that as an ego boost, I wasn't watching you in particular, I peep everyones battle on a basis) This line was weak though, maybe you didn't realise it was played though, either way, not very good. Try to stay fresh and just try to always know what is played and what is cool these days, cuz you have the ability to drop decent. I noticed you have been kind of slacking and you've been REALLY inconsistent in some battles. Actually put your effort, fine tune your verses, read it and say if someone else wrote this would I think it was good? And then you should be dropping pretty good all the time.

Makaveli Trained - I seen you on RB and some of your shit here also, look, your good but ALWAYS inconsistent, you'll have a good battle, then a CRAP one, you'll have 3 good lines in a row and then a shit one. You know? Well anyways this week was your crap week so to speak. That punch was just plain terrible, the personal didn't even hit, AND that line is actually played out by wack noobies. Basicaly same shit I told to Vaskez. You should REALLY focus on spending MORE TIME on your verses, and fine tune them, and you should be good, remember, MORE TIME, make sure everything about it is good to you.

Therefore, it came down to this

Horible and played punch vs. Good punch but played

So I gtg with Vaskez on this one.

V/ The guy with that mexican name.
 
Old 10-11-05, 09:08 PM   #12
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Who are you theory? Calling me son and shit, you talking like a vet.
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-11-05, 10:38 PM   #13
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nooooooooooo, were not a vet, were random noobs. -_-
 
Old 10-12-05, 08:34 AM   #14
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neither came hot....but...

v/vaskez..
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Old 10-12-05, 10:14 AM   #15
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vaskez that was wack as fuck

the concept you used was played to fuck, i mean ure basically saying he eats dick which is a homo line and they are probably the most played out lines on RV and the added multi didn't help you any.

MT....ure fuckin bar was weak as fuck to, i got the whole sorta punch you were going for after Vaskez made it apparent that you two are crew on RB, but still weak

V/ - Makeveli Trained..........for not coming totally played!!
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