Word, just a lil rep track, done up quick. Fuck Blay, Fuck Paranoid, and Fuck anyone who won't stay the fuck out of business that don't fucking involve them. Fall back....

p.s. this ain't meant to be a diss track, just rep shit for mixtape

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LINKS:
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163086
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241801

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i ain't got no prolems wit blay n para but this shit is hot....M.A.S on em baby!!!..y'all already know niggas can't fuck wit us

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....suck a dick faggot.....

worddddd and LOL fixed chipmunk shit

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personally i dont like your voice..but i'll still listen to it


verse 1 - flow is nice on this track..like the little switch ups you got. haha are u talkin about BLAY? this is pretty cool. like the last line of this verse

hook - basically kept the same sound of the original

part after the hook is cool.


there was nothing really special about this..flow was cool..lyrically it worked. quality was cool....

honestly...why use a famous beat? To me, it automatically lowers the value of the track because you can't truly market it as your own.

Other than that, flow is on point...
delivery grows monotone at points...lyrics don't stand out as much...The beat is overpowering your presence some...

hook is delivered nicely though


I couldn't quite make out what you said in the last couple bars of the hook


pretty decent track though


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i like the track, u did it well, and for using other peoples beats if u dont plan on marketing it why not, i personally enjoy hearin other emcees do other peoples beats to see what they come up wit. 1

lol man i don't see why someone CAN'T use a famous beat. I'm not gonna market this as my single, I just wanted to spit to it, so I spat to it. I'm not pushing it as single.

but word appreciate all the feed y'all

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stop sleepin y'allllllll

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