yo get yours up quick i'll have mine up in halfy
10 lines...........

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aye yo check in too...........

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checking in

sorry shit took so long i wanted a quick verse before i got picked up, but got picked up earlier than expected, but here it is


Can’t find this “someone” in any news page
Cuz Yo verse less stiring than pre-made cool-aid
yo I’ll beat ya spittin my worse put his punches in a google search
findings “no ONE” in his complete verse
i know yo tricks, he jus copies and clicks
kids who ride this guy’s dick can make it under a 2 inch clearance
cuz yo skills are low, like a river, but with no flow
take time when i rhyme best tolerate, cuz a punk should wait
for this finishing punch on this battle cuz it will punctuate.
heres sumin to remember
your lines couldn't out shine mine
if u rhymed during daylight saving time
and I was stuck in december
>>>>>>>>>>>>

done, finished, get yo shit up here so i can get my 5 votes right quick and win this

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13 lines for you too ~

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I'm not even sure if that's an attempt at disrespect,
as a seasoned battlerapper it's worse than I'd expect.

Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'

Now onto your mother, but you've all heard this before..
She's the original crack ass whore
Gets on the floor, spreads all four, no-one's unwanted in that cheap store
She didn't think you through -- pictureperfect2
coming straight from the zoo -- wasn't wanted there too

This bitch is way off track, I'd say 100 thousand yards
Like a cerebral palsy wrack, building a house of cards *

p-perfect's number ONE on the 'ranking list in town'
or at least that's what he thought, when he 'held it upside down' ~

Oh..


* CP: A life-long condition that affects the communication between the brain and the muscles, causing a permanent state of uncoordinated movement and posturing.



Could we get some votes please

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Can’t find this “someone” in any news page
Cuz Yo verse less stiring than pre-made cool-aid
Good punch
yo I’ll beat ya spittin my worse put his punches in a google search
findings “no ONE” in his complete verse
this was alright
i know yo tricks, he jus copies and clicks
kids who ride this guy’s dick can make it under a 2 inch clearance
Ya ya its been done
cuz yo skills are low, like a river, but with no flow
Eh
take time when i rhyme best tolerate, cuz a punk should wait
for this finishing punch on this battle cuz it will punctuate.
What? Oh i see
heres sumin to remember
your lines couldn't out shine mine
if u rhymed during daylight saving time
and I was stuck in december
Nice closer


I'm not even sure if that's an attempt at disrespect,
as a seasoned battlerapper it's worse than I'd expect.
Good opening
Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'
eh its aiight
Now onto your mother, but you've all heard this before..
She's the original crack ass whore
Gets on the floor, spreads all four, no-one's unwanted in that cheap store
Stop hatin on da mommas
She didn't think you through -- pictureperfect2
coming straight from the zoo -- wasn't wanted there too
Ok punch
This bitch is way off track, I'd say 100 thousand yards
Like a cerebral palsy wrack, building a house of cards *
Nice punch
p-perfect's number ONE on the 'ranking list in town'
or at least that's what he thought, when he 'held it upside down' ~
Nice finish

Aiight the final
Picture-5/10
Someone-7/10

Return da favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123748

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uuuuppin.

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Picture - Good spit man, liked your flow and your punches were hitten hard.

Best line - heres sumin to remember
your lines couldn't out shine mine
if u rhymed during daylight saving time
and I was stuck in december (niice finisher)

Worst Line - i know yo tricks, he jus copies and clicks
kids who ride this guy’s dick can make it under a 2 inch clearance

someone - Good spit man, Best I have seen from ya you came hard wit some good flow and good punches.

Best Line - Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'

Worst Line - Now onto your mother, but you've all heard this before..
She's the original crack ass whore
Gets on the floor, spreads all four, no-one's unwanted in that cheap store (played and simple)

OVERALL - Close battle here... but I gotta say Picture took this cuz his punches were just more creative. Someone man.. work on more creative shit and maybe some personals.. and you will be hard to beat.

VOTE - Picture

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755

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Thanks for the critism GKillaz05, I appreciate it.

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