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05-04-04, 07:49 PM | #1 | |||||||
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the streets' reminder
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
juss 10 lines i will make it longer dont wrry.
i wrote this to JAY-Z's the TAKE OVER. Miles ahead of half you niggas juss COUNT-DA-DISTANCE// And wen I retire imam settle down at MT.-OLYMPUS// But for now I’m trying like the JOHN McCLAIN of HIP HOP// Aiming for big shots// ficses in microwaves is da only way u’d make ya SHIT HOT// You pricks, stop// cuz not every CASE-can-be-CLOSED// And I roll with niggas who’s holsta reaches from they WAIST-to-they-TOES// Take my advice and watch yo mouth nigga I juss hope you relax// Cuz I kno u kno, every phone can be tapped, and codes can be cracked// I run it, I rip it,// I’ve done it you witnessed// Spit nothing but sickness// you want this come get this// gimme some feedback yall
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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05-04-04, 07:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
Suspended: Biting
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IP: B967 D26B
shit was good...very nice....no complaints...u came hard with it....u spat wht was on ur heart it sounds like so thats what makes it hott....
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05-04-04, 08:42 PM | #3 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Thats Some Good Shit Man!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-04-04, 09:41 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
im feelin that big upps
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05-05-04, 03:50 PM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4289 77F4
yo thanks for the feedback so far yall and i would like some more holla back at ya boi.....
come on
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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05-06-04, 12:41 PM | #6 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 587B E26D
i need more feedback yall come on
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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05-06-04, 01:00 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 2936 13AA
yeah that's wus up partna i'm feelin it
Put sum lenght on it and dat shit will be fire. It's wit it tho good shit |
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05-06-04, 04:28 PM | #8 | |||||
Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP: 3240 794D
i liked it.....u had some nice flow and some good creativity......big ups........keep writing
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05-06-04, 04:34 PM | #9 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 937F C2E6
wow, dat is well gd lol, i aint no expert at all dis rap battlin but dat was amazin
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05-06-04, 08:07 PM | #10 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: C1DA C961
thanks for the feedback but i want more.
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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05-06-04, 08:31 PM | #11 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 9E88 B351
The take over...nigga ya breaks over...god emcee me jay hova....lol, sorry i had the song in my head and shit, but ya verse was hot, stay up!!!!!!!!
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05-07-04, 03:48 PM | #12 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
i need more feedback. drop a link on ur open mic and i'll holla back.
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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05-09-04, 06:36 PM | #13 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4289 77F4
yo gimme some feedback yall....
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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05-09-04, 06:39 PM | #14 | |||||||
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IP: C0C4 704D
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123259
you are good man, your rhymes are Smooth, and good Vocab, only thing is some verses too long
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05-09-04, 08:06 PM | #15 | ||||||||
G.Y.T.
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IP: EC0B 84C7
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100% hottttttttttttttt |
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