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MAKE THIS HOT!!

signin n....dont wurry bout dat i will

a ima prolly hav my verse n by TUESDAY or WEDNESDAY ima wait till dis otha nigga sign in b-4 i put n my verse

im hea...

verse prolly be in on wednesday

pz

yo you should think again before callin this emcee out a second time/ cuz thats only gonna give you seconds reloadin the clip to run and hide/
blood spillin, killa-mic blazin Lz just chillin/
killings occuring from this killer on the mic, droppin bombs quicker then you can say Din-O-Mite/
TRIKSTA you a stale phillie to my crystal/ runnin your mouth quicker then caffine mixed with mysti-Kal/
no motha fucka we aint pals, you rub me wrong like electricity static/ do the simple mathmatics, there aint no survival for crack attics especially when burg niggaz startin littering shrapnel with these automatics/
tought to adapt wit a mic in my hand, kick back the stand and sink you with my lyrical quick sand/
why you call this match? dont you understand I mastered the art of the Bitch Slap/ now you trapped with you back to the wall, snap you neck and watch your empire cruble to fall/ ya to small to swallow whats "cummin",
so you best spit out your gum or start runnin/

i kno it aint dat aint dat many lines bt its lethal

where he hat man

damn kidd,u tryin ta get ya post count up or sum shit,anyhow,here it is...short n sweet

u can 'fry' in my 'pan',only way u gon bring 'heat'-to-this/
like yaw remains on my fist,im brandishin 'shit stains' from this/
like light vs heavy in tha ring,i let tha pain take-its-course/
ill stop u readin 'otha lyrics',and cut out ur 'power source'/
killa mic aint gonna 'rise' from the 'ashes',ill put u 'up in smoke'/
u juss a 'vaseline' lovin 'tramp',an ill leave u 'bent' n 'broke'/
u gettin 'fucked' more 'nasty' than 'britney' in 'fake' porn flix/
you juss the 'under' 'belly' and im bringin a 'pack of six'/
if it wasnt for you,this league battle would be 'classy'/
itll take more than ya normal 'rubbish' for ur ass to 'trash' me/
tha 'truth hurts' kidd,so stock up on them 'pain killers'/
ur dirty like wacko jacko,ur just plastic,a 'chyld' 'thriller'/

get votin yall

Man this battle was aight, I wanted more drama....Both of yall didn't have eye-openin' punchlines.

Killamic started off wit this:


and I was like "man the other dude won", but he sparked the flames with these bars:



which I thought were aight...mystikal shit was funny then later on he brings these two punchlines:



Which were ok

As for Tricksta, he came nice with these bars:



Overall verse was aight...So my vote goes to Killamic....and the only reason I voted for Killamic was because he had more punchlines then Tricksta....I would'ev voted for u dog, only if you came wit more punches.

Vote = Killamic

THOSE were some nice lines, Tricksta was a lil to simple, not as hard hitting punches, but he still came decent


vote=killa

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K1ll@mic:
Your verse was aight...I could tell it was keyed because you used so many played out concepts..you made attempt at personals and had punches but they werent hitting hard...and you closed your verse out with a "cum" line...Ask any emcee anywhere in the world and theyll tell you a cum line is the most played concept ever...its horrible and displays a lack of skill when yo resort to suck wackness...flow aight...bar structure threw me off a lil...
Overall:3.0/10

Tricksta:
you had an alright verse yourself...flow was better...wordplay was incredibly forced...your verse wasnt as complex but the punches were better...you should try to use more punchline sin your verse than just forcing wordplay like that becuase a lot of those lines didnt make much sense...enough of them did though...
Overall:3.5/10

Trick-like light vs heavy in tha ring,i let tha pain take-its-course/
ill stop u readin 'otha lyrics',and cut out ur 'power source'/
killa mic aint gonna 'rise' from the 'ashes',ill put u 'up in smoke'/
u juss a 'vaseline' lovin 'tramp',an ill leave u 'bent' n 'broke'/
u gettin 'fucked' more 'nasty' than 'britney' in 'fake' porn flix/
you juss the 'under' 'belly' and im bringin a 'pack of six'/

Killa-tought to adapt wit a mic in my hand, kick back the stand and sink you with my lyrical quick sand/
why you call this match? dont you understand I mastered the art of the Bitch Slap/ now you trapped with you back to the wall, snap you neck and watch your empire cruble to fall/ ya to small to swallow whats "cummin",
so you best spit out your gum or start runnin/

Tha beggenin was too much braggin, but killa came harder at the end, Vote Killa

gotta say the best punches came from killamic, gotta give it to him, it was pretty even, nice flows from both sides, good wordplay, but betta punches

vote=killamic

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4-1 me uppin fo da win

Blah..This Match Was Some - What Weak..Both Had Points To Where It Didnt Make Sense..But I Think Tricksta Got This..He Had A Shorter Verse..But To Me He Had Harder Punches And Came With More Quality Over Quanity..Keep Elevating..Pz..

Vote - Tricksta