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01-05-05, 11:44 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Bless-the-Stress,
I cant get this Pain of My Chest, Invest my Thoughts in Fatality... Reality Is Immortality, Nobody Ever Really Dies -Wise Blank thoughts and Vacant Eye's.... *Breakin Tries*! Hope is Fading and 'Angsts Disguised', Head 'Begins Recession' and moves to 'Thin Recession'...' Addicted To Pain' Iv'e 'Inflicted The Pain' till evil thoughts 'Restricted The Brain'!!! Contradicted Thoughts, Life Is Death, Coke-dope-or-meth.... Drug Choice Of my Voice Eats at my Flesh, Mesh an Attack from the Back of the World, Hurled Afront...Confront the Frustration of Searching for Action of Justification .. *Uncontrollable Urges* trick me into 'Rolling With Purges', When Have I 'Succomed To Wrong', Played Chess With The Devil And Ive *Become A Pawn* ...'Confront Inner Demons' but they've 'Took Control', hope is gone ive *Shook Withdrawl*!!! Spawn of the Devil, On Another Level, Bevel Hearts to Start an Rip Apart.... Trapped an Confused, Used Myself In stealth for Material Wealth, In Hell And Surviving Striving for Carnage & Death.. Label souls 'Undead' cause minds *Lost The Passion* and Care for the *Cost Of Actions*... Approached the light but the *Mind are Pale* since the 'Shine Is Stale'... (good, love, happiness)...words just 'Defined The Frail'!!!! Fail Thoughts An Hopes....Shown the Ropes, By Damian Himself, Melt an Meld, Witheld No Information...Where In Formation, Satans Creation, Eatin Cats Whole like a Starving Hatian... Undoubted Frailties haunt my 'Inner Desires', Horrific acts followed with *Grins Of Desire*, 'Inspired' by the 'Dealings Of Fate'.. 'Appealing To Hate'... Welcoming The Dark Lord i *Kneel In My Place*!!! Lord Keep me Safe! drop link with-in 24 hours to where u gave feed back on or this will be closed....... im just doing my job...... we gotta get open mic more active so it can stay alive....
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01-07-05, 01:15 AM | #2 | |||||||
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uppin..........this...........shit................
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01-07-05, 10:36 AM | #4 | |||||
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this was a nice drop, had a consistent flow to it... the content-- i can't relate to, but it was still nice..
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01-07-05, 10:47 AM | #5 | |||
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drop link with-in 24 hours to where u gave feed back on or this will be closed.......
im just doing my job...... we gotta get open mic more active so it can stay alive.... |
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01-07-05, 12:12 PM | #6 | |||||||
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167365..............................
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01-07-05, 12:22 PM | #7 | |||
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u have 24 hours to drop a proper link with proper feed back or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 ^^^ click read N understand the link above..... that link wont count..... u still have 24 hours.... |
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01-07-05, 02:11 PM | #8 | ||||
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this was kool...........had good vocab and structer.........
and pretty good topic............... ~Babz~ |
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01-07-05, 02:19 PM | #9 | |||
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^^^ u will be warn if u continue to drop feed-back like this......
dont let me see 1-line-feed-back again...... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 |
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01-07-05, 02:22 PM | #10 | ||||
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u need to git the stick outta ya ass.............u wack mod
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01-07-05, 02:23 PM | #11 | |||
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^^^ tuff talk always helps.....
to get u bannd quicker......... u have been warn.... |
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01-08-05, 12:15 AM | #12 | |||||||
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u need to be doing this links shit with the battle becuase i have four battles thats been open for a month
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01-08-05, 12:21 AM | #13 | |||||||
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01-08-05, 12:45 AM | #14 | ||||||
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thai was all right but you should learn to multi- rhyme like this
groove strong while I move along// with the type fame roll like a train// down a track with nouns and fact//fiddle with attitude like little cubes// |
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01-08-05, 12:26 PM | #15 | |||||||
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what the fuck those multies are weak as fuck ill show u multies
its as if i was borned cursed submerged in perverse illness the scripts i disburse disperse Sins and invert critics npw thats a good example of multies
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