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08-30-05, 11:32 PM | #1 | |||||
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supergangstaz
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now for all yall trying to douse torch and crumble this cookie FUCK you we some super ganstaz and yall just sit back and read this shit
TORCH OREO I Put The Torch To Your Face Man, Now That's Some X-Men I Wreck When I Step In The Ring, Watch The Steel Flex An Scratch You With A Mask On, Like Wolverine An Cyclops Torch Your Face Down, Next You'll Be Needing Eye Drops It's The Calm Before The Storm, Bullet's Man I'll Use It Don't Abuse It, Cause We'll Have You On The Movement I'll Fly By Spitting Flame's Like A Dragon And Super Man Don't Trip, I'll Break Every Bone In You Like You Roofing Fam Look Man, I'll Karate Kick You, Dog But I Aint Lu Kang I'll Split You With A Razor, Leave You In Two Mang And On Top Of That, I'll Leave Your Flopping Like A Fish A Bullet's Sends Sonya, Aint No One Topping That Kiss the fruit aint gotta split to watch the bananas peel hes the hoods clark kent torch is the man of steel his name gots the block hot,go head and stop drop now yall cock block with more hands than dock ock his trigger finger ae hurtin,bleedin and throbbin a thief, so fuck a batman my sidekick is Robin its not gonna take much to take care of ya R.v walks with the Shield like Captain Amercia gats light storm, flashin and lightnin the techs man even gots Proffesor Xavier poppin the X-men this my team so dont get touch with that red beam leavein metal fragments in your body like wolverine http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2391438 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205845
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08-30-05, 11:35 PM | #2 | ||||
Torching You All
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HaHa Fuckers We're Here Now!
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Lord, Forgive Me Ft Sabotage Something Like That-Ft Torch Summer Nights-Ft Troch Super G's Ft Oreo The Council
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08-31-05, 09:02 PM | #3 | |||||
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uppin...lookin for some feed
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09-01-05, 08:49 PM | #4 | |||||
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09-02-05, 01:06 AM | #5 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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good i guess but wtf superheroes nooo lol
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09-02-05, 11:52 PM | #6 | |||||
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whats wrong with super heros?? i cant get creative...its borin so use the same stlye over and over
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09-03-05, 12:05 AM | #7 | |||||||
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ehhhh it was ight had some played out but ight metaphors in here...structure was good...flow was decent i could read without havin ta go back a sentence...ur rhyme scheme was a lil played out but overall it was decent better than some catz i seen on here..and even though u had an attempt ta make it original it had an old old old topic every person almost talks bout on this site....gunz, gatz, heaters, etc....that shit is so played out mayn....be more original...truth is u probably never even touched a gun in ur life so please dont bring that shit to the net it'll just make u look like an e-thug....maybe u do have that shit but please find sumthin else ta rap bout...gunz are so boring ta hear bout nowadayz..but overall it was a decent o.m....keep it up and keep elevating....7.5/10
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09-03-05, 12:31 AM | #8 | |||||
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thanks i guess...um yeah i have.....but i dont really brag on it...just having fun damn
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09-04-05, 01:21 AM | #9 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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yo oreo are u half black and half white or sumthin...and empty ur pms i was gon send this too u but ur thangs full
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09-04-05, 03:08 AM | #10 | |||||
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im pure white...this is what they call me in my neighborhood so its been my rap name since i started
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09-04-05, 09:21 PM | #11 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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oh werd..........
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09-05-05, 01:58 AM | #12 | |||||
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im feeling that sig..while he feelin himself
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