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checking in......

You're going to get killed.

who's going to get killed?...
....(you dun fucked up).....

I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite!




your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!

early 20 on your ass
hahaaaaa!

I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis
feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..



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That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch



Eh, i dont know. this is pretty close. bob i think you did alright, you've always
got a few good solid bars in your verse...and your always consistent. I seen a few
in there that i just really didnt like @ all. i've seen you come stronger, but overall not bad. mim this is the first i've seen from you in a while. it wasnt bad though. i can tell your def rusty...but you had alot of nice attempts. a few actually hit ok as well.

so i got mim taking this seriously by a hair..good match guys

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who's going to get killed?...
....(you dun fucked up).....
lol good intro got me amp for some raw shit...

I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
decent start....

sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
good, but choppy flow..

feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
nah...

rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
so true... good...

you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite!
would of hit alot better if worded better... but still decent...


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Originally Posted by Mimesis
I haven't done this shit in 3 years but I'm still a beast.



your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
good.

spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
haha funny...

the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
didnt flow right with the set up... but i feel what u saying...

truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
decent..

back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!
nice...

some good punches, some just didnt hit as hard due to ur set up bars,
flow was good, even thou u had like a bar or 2 that could of been worded a bit better to flow better.
concept's was good...
good drop fam 8/10



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Who the fuck is this kid?

I'm 80-0 -- not including wins in leagues and tournaments. You're 1-0.

I wrote verses 3 years ago that your best verse couldn't beat now.

Get the fuck out of my face.
*decent intro got me feeling like u might drop some heat...*

I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair
So I'll take another one to your neck. .
. .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair
the set up bar didnt make sense to me * i'll take another one to ur neck??*
need better wording...

The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it
We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public
HA! good nameplay...

That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
NAH weak...

I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in
But no one takes charges from lyrics. .
. .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit
good set up and punch..

And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer
So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number
WHAT!?! nah...

That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes
I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you
decent but not hard hiting..

As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
decent...

And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch

decent...

Fuck outta here, faggot.
^^ good ending lol...

punches was good, some didnt make sense and some was jabs no knock out blows...
flow: good, some area could of use better wording...
concept: decent 8/10


after re-reading both verse i have it barberic wining this slightly,
good battle drop from both much respect to ya and good luck...

The set up says, "I took a break for a long time. . ." The start of the punchline says "So I'll take another one. . ."

"Taking another one" implied "Taking another break," as I had just mentioned it in the set up. The set up is supposed to set up the punchline.

Notice I even used the same verb to help the reader remember what they just read 1 second ago in the set up -- "I TOOK a break" and "I'll TAKE another one."

I didn't think it was that hard to get.

1-1.

I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
hmm don't think I ever seen something like this. cool stuff
sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
no.. this didn't work at all
feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
wtf? no
rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
Too statementish. Not harsh at all
you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite!
Ok, using links in punches is played out. And second, the punch isn't even that hard hitting. ehh


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
I haven't done this shit in 3 years but I'm still a beast.


your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
ehh doesn't work
spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
ehh
the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
not harsh
truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
ok
back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!
kinda cool

Overall, started off with some creativity but really just fell off. Nothing too great here. Some lines were just way too statementish and could have been made a lot harder.

mimesis
I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair
So I'll take another one to your neck. .
. .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair
set up had me thinking you coming with something tight. But punch really failed to hit hard
The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it
We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public
ehh I see what you trying but it was worded too sloppily
That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
played sonnnn. lol playeddd
I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in
But no one takes charges from lyrics. .
. .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit
ok
And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer
So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number
ok
That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes
I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you
coo
As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
haha nice swagger
And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch
ehh

Overall, this verse was mediocre to your standards. Seems like you still shaking off the rust. You got your wording down, just need to make punches hit a little harsher. Not bad tho.

Overall, wasn't really mch in this battle. But Mim really attempted more creativity with his lines and his punches were worded a lot better. So he gets this fairly easy.

v/Mim

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You know what that's true didn't even peep game fam o so in that case it was good my fult but since I voted already I don't think it matters now but my fult for that one kid...

480 views and 3 votes.

Jesus.

welcome back to Rapverse

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I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
lol I kides that was clever
sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
not really feeling
feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
lol this wasn't that bad
rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
not feeling
you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite!
worded bad could of been ok
your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
not feeling
spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
lol this was ok but not huge
the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
na
truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
not gfeeling either
back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!
ok but not huge





I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair
So I'll take another one to your neck. .
. .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair
na wasn't feeling
The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it
We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public
na poorly executed
That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
this was ok but niot huge
I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in
But no one takes charges from lyrics. .
. .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit
na
And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer
So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number
again not feeling
That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes
I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you
wasn't feeling either
As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
bragging to throw a punch is weak unless you do it perfectly and this wasn't
And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch
this was ok prolly one of the beter jump line but they are geting old




not a bad battle weak though, gunna give it to boberric, more small punches landed.

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
dope original concept i havent seen before.real nice....

sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
this was weak and worded badly..

feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
weak also.......

rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
so true... good...

you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite
this was decent but worded badly..

your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
dope line here lol..............

spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
weak concept again...

the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
weak............

truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
decent..

back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!
ok.................




Who the fuck is this kid?

I'm 80-0 -- not including wins in leagues and tournaments. You're 1-0.
^^wtf does that have to do with anything?.........


I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair
So I'll take another one to your neck. .
. .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair
played concept and aint really no good punch here not to mention that if YOU took one to the neck then you'd be in the wheelchair:/.........


The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it
We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public
gay jokes are fuckin beyond played and you know that no matter how you word them...

That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
weak...

I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in
But no one takes charges from lyrics. .
. .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit
horrible.streched like fuckin crazy.syllabell count is 20 off at least.punch is garbage also..

And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer
So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number
gay that your studying his body...

That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes
I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you
decent but not hard hiting..

As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
self glory?are you fuckin serious?in a battle?in 2009?no...

And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch

corny...



battle was ok.bar had a few good punches while memisis had none and his flow was streched as fuck making the words hard to follow and the punches less effective at the same time.

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