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03-09-04, 11:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
*Just Try And Stop Me*
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Heavenly Above ~/~ Hell Below
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a mystical creature with such beauty and poise,
silver streaks of a imaginary creation blends with the wind of this goddess glistening eyes reflect the rising sun seaking and trapping glorious imagery with the power of gods and beauty if the universe with its head held high a king among the creatures of myths a life; a world they live alone no kurruption or harm will intervien a peaceful meadow, and flowing streams flowers, and waterfalls create a scene that backgrounds to the true beauty of these things of there own live above us, in heavenly mists where good is triumphant and evil was never thought the beauty remains and lives with colors of the heavens we live in the middle of above & below you look above and thats all u need 2 kno^^ see below and shutter with fear read below we are the above death so near furocious beasts seek blood black takes over the underworld to bring death and pitty to all where all are enemies every beast flows the blood of evil who all are tought and love to hate with no sun, just black clouds surround the sky with tremendous power to never let see a glimps of light littered with black swamps & over powering flowing lava a place of hell, and kurruption always remaining in the dark where fire breaths and smoke bewilders the beasts to a new shade of dazaster awakes all is pale, took by death an aroma of fear sweats from it all is lost and forgottin hear to see a shadow death to underlook the undeworld with the pain brought by hell
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03-15-04, 05:04 PM | #2 | ||||||
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It's a good juxtaposition, nicely written. You painted a very vivid picture. There is something missing though, like it doesn't end.
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Give away the stone. Let the oceans take and transmutate this cold and fated anchor. Give away the stone. Let the waters kiss and transmutate these leaden grudges into gold. |
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03-24-04, 03:23 AM | #3 | ||||
....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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yo it was very detailed
good poem hot stuff one love..... |
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04-07-04, 03:13 PM | #4 | ||||
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It was a nice drop, I especially liked the fact you didnt rhyme everyone line directly behind each other
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