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08-08-04, 06:30 AM | #1 | |||
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"Back Bite" i need da critics
IP: 6CF5 20BB
ma first drop, be cruel be true i need da critics
ive been disrespected all ma life cuz im white and im poor when im in da club bitches wanna push me out the door well now its teh time to kill tha score any fuckers touch me goin straight to the floor they say cuz im white i cant rhyme since when light skinned rapper is a crime groupies dont hang with me too when they hear ma name they say WHO? Guess what bitches times are done changed ladder of royalty done rearanged now taht ivve sold bunch of keys ive done earn plenty G's Now aint no problem hittin the mics im up dere every night neliverin bites each eve you hear mother fuckas get trashed guess what homeboy your dreams have been crashed i aint frontin i aint tryin to be eminem each night i come home who i am hoes now know $ to tha L to tha X We now in tha back havin sex I know i aint only on the block Pay respect to the ones with a vess and the glock holdin one maself in case "homie what...." Beef gets hot ill pop one on the spot never forget ma homeboys they're wit me respect everyone who respects me I'm out Back soon wit more postings
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08-08-04, 06:47 AM | #2 | |||||||
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hm... since you were aksing for it i'll be totally honest: the subject is really played, the structure was way off and the lines were very simple. try working on your flow and wordplay and be more creative with what you write. peace!
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08-08-04, 04:09 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
thanks man ill c on ma flow words and topics peace.
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