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Old 03-25-06, 01:40 PM   #1
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Nothing Like This (for My City)

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yall know how i do....i been gone for a min...but we know i blaze the songs out, i better get audio nigga this month or next month, lol

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224942

get back at me on the feed....
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Old 03-25-06, 02:03 PM   #2
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Listening...beat is kool...not my type...but u rocking it well ...hook is pretty nice...real cocky shit thas wasup my nigga....flow is sick fam....delivery is good...real cocky...feelin dat..lyrics hot..flow is best....good shit fam 1
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Old 03-26-06, 09:37 AM   #3
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goodlookz for the feed....can i get somemore, get at me
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Old 03-26-06, 06:19 PM   #4
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for starters, I HATE synthesized beats liek this so I'm relaly just gonna speak no the lyrics.

You need better mixing on your vocals and definitely bump your lows to give you more warmth in the voice. Hook's ok. Typical clubby stuff. Lyrics during the first verse are somewhat what I'd expect from a song on a beat like this, 'I'm the best' 'this is my city' 'I'm the king' etc etc etc, the usual stuff.

lmao @ shouting out the flea market in the local locales lol.
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