aight checkin in
i'll have my verse in a few

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checkin in...............

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yo
Chrits a played out playa,lookin in the clubs,an internet freak,looking for guys to give 'em hugs/
When we first battled, i was only a rookie, soon after i learned,how to leave his ass "raw" like "sushi"/
Im not really interested in battlin no more, claim this "slut" to pieces, just to show him a "whore"/
This niggas "comin out",so stop tryin to "hide it", cuz your like "sneakers", how you stay "comin out the closet"/
you took to battlin rookies and tryin to win, but fucking wit me is like committing mortal sin/
King Chrit is what he claims himself to be, but if anything your "lies" is bigger then the "lips" on jay-z/
you ain't no king but i won't say you got 40 wins by "luck", because it seems to me its that ya "lightning struck"/
I seen your public profile, lemme read it here "im'a junkie,livin wit my mom all day drinkin' beer/
I'm a dirty slob and "nobody likes me", so you see my "life's on the line" how i relate to "50"/

Nahh nigga you whack, so many wins, you mustv'e got a "rap attack",but come into my "hospital" to see how you'd "react"/
ANd don't try to respond,your verse will be whacker, you can't bounce off this, if you had wolverines healing factor/
you call yourself king chrit, thaz how you get by, you should relate to "cigarette" commercials,talkin bout "pack of lies"
matter fact...
you only live wit a man, so how do you get "bi", it seems only normal you only have one bed,you must sleep wit that guy/



ahhh fuck it, this verse wasn't that great
no beef either... peace

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Aight look..........


This kid's from B.R.E the crew known for fake thug lyrics in open mics/
But in battles, cat couldnt giving a tongue lashing even if he was adored by dykes/
Reppin a bunch of cats that cant or wont battle.. a bunch of straight up whores/
Shit man this wack cat got his name when he saw Chrit then went home and examined his drawers/
You preaching street shit then peep this, my verses compile into a ghetto thesis/
See Chrit's grimey while he's grindin,and lord willin you wont have to meet my clipse/(clips)
Let me slow it down for you, I know my syllable count just left ya head spinnin/
Not even to 5 bars and a clowned ya whole career, cant you see the voters grinnin?/
So I'ma end this shit quick with ten lines cause I feel bad about merking a verse that was such a bore/
Next time try not to make it so evident you bought you flows from the half price store/


^^^ only dropped 10 due to time constraints

voting time ya'll

and yeah, no beef man

voting time uppin for this shit
and no sleepin
aiyo chrit that was a hot verse
good battle...
now people don't sleep on this shit

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^nope........u still need to learn.....becuz like that line.....the rest
of ur verse was kinda cheesy.....u had wordplay.....but that was
pretty much it.....i didn't really feel it......chrit...won this for better
punches....even though i can tell he didn't really try.....

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yup, i see what ya sayin, thanks for actually postin in here, shit gets slept in alot nowadays...

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i'll vote on ya shits if ya vote here first
i want the votes here first.1

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Damn, Skiddz has all the basics down, he just needs to get more advanced with his wordplay and elevate it, make it harder hitting by re-wording it, take some time to make the line as dope as you can. You had some ok concepts, but they just werent worded too well, thats what let your verse down man.

Lmao @ Chrits tongue lashing line, that was pretty nice, finisher wasnt too hard but he'd already done enough to take this, just better wordplay, nicely worded, flow could do with a notch up, but he had a better verse overall.

Vote: Chrit

thanks for the votes(even though they chrits)
and the advice,im still tryin to elevate
thanks vortex,1

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Chrits verse was nice. Skiddz, u did a good job dawg, but like disciple said, u only had wordplay. jus gotta improve more on punches next time. Good job dough. So Imma give dis to Chrits. Had nice hard punches and flowed nicely. Keep elevatin. good battle to both.

vote=Chrit

im'a start battlin in elite because atleast here, the people are real on they votes, unlike in frontlines where newbies don't know shit or explain shit

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iight lemme break it down
BRE had some plain asslines n most of em were played nothign that made my eyes open even a lil bit n his flow was choppy

chrit had some nice punches here and there and his delievery was ok.
so he gets my vote
return the favor yall.
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