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You said what you had to say, then you left for good,
Last we talked, you was added as the next bitch in my book,
I offered you everything, you grabbed and you took,
Figured we never speak again, I let you go and never relooked,
without you my heart was gone, scorned deep words in this song,
I know I didn’t go wrong, but you left me alone,
Had to go off at night, but I always came home,
I loved bein with you, seein you, but life goes on,
Thing’s were great, I drove everyday to be with you,
I knew you wasn’t as true, as you claimed to be boo,
But I stuck though, looking for Ms. Right to be there,
I finally cared, I let you fuck with my head

Can’t let her get the best of you dawg,
But is hard, left with emotional scars,
But its hard, finding perfect for the job,
But its hard, you gotta let her go,
Housewives cannot come from hoes
But it’s hard

Now where do I start, I met you with Beth,
We left, and had sex at the park, Sex in the car,
Cadillac Leather with your panties on the floor,
Hittin it that night, what 3 times raw,
You stayed the night, the next mournin some more,
It was great, a girl that had sense, I reminese,
About me and you just hugs and kisses,
No thuggish shit, we was just chillen,
You wasn’t about the money, but I did what I could,
I couldn’t afford the finer things, but you understood,
Or at least I thought you did, I did my best stayin out the hood,
I guess you left, when the getting got good


Can’t let her get the best of you dawg,
But is hard, left with emotional scars,
But its hard, finding perfect for the job,
But its hard, you gotta let her go,
Housewives cannot come from hoes
But it’s hard

Months went by, I seen you once at Burger King,
Thought about you the whole time, even in my dreams
I was at Wal-Mart, gettin my Pops some things,
I seen a blonde, but paid no her no attention,
Now come to mention, I knew her name
I got a call from someone, in just a few days
It was your friend sayin you was sorry for your ways,
How you was scared to call me, knowin this call was to late,
I got your number, then I gave you a call,
It’s been so long, listen to your voice in awwww,
But you didn’t answer, why not,
Was you scared to talk, I threw away that thought,
When the phone rang, then I answered the call,
We talked, and you said you would have been my down ass chick,
You couldn’t be with me, I know you couldn’t handle it,
I can’t be with you, yous to scandless

Can’t let her get the best of you dawg,
But is hard, left with emotional scars,
But its hard, finding perfect for the job,
But its hard, you gotta let her go,
Housewives cannot come from hoes
But it’s hard

Reviewed:
Masta C
Word Perfect
The Realist

Dont forget to coment

You sure do write a lot lol..

But anyways....this was ok.....your structure seems to be improving since your last couple pieces i thought, but keep working on that, you are getting there...you could try to use some more multies though to help it out...but thiis was ok....and keep at it

Thanx yo

Like Masta C said...you really improved on your structure, it used to suck ass

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!

Use more multi's and up ur vocab , ..content was erm , ..basic..try to do something, different..= ) ..write more, ..ull elevate ..but use more multi's..

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Fuck you

Awsome. Nice topic. Funny... I was gonna write about the same thing. The first few lines don't match the rest of the song in structure, but it's aight as long as you know how to rap it. Good drop.