10 Linez 5 Barz

Crew Can Vote We In The Same 1
No DR
NO HATE VOTES

Hour Time Limit Checkin Son....

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Verses Due at 12 Lets Do Dis

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Don't Get Wordpay Huh!!! Then Don't Vote

We in the same Crew...lol...this shud be fun!

I Breached the walls of your Exterior N Devoured Envy's Interior..
the most Useless/Inactive member is now kneeling at his Superior
see I rip a whole Inside you..like Anal w/out much needed Lubes
..you may have 51 wins but we all know they came from Noobs
or Flidimied Typers..coz only the Disabled are at this Gimps Pace..
..of course we're in Contension..Envy's disadvantaged in this Race
NOTICE--that in the Rules..Envy put NO HATE VOTES in Cap's..lol..
..thinks peeps actually care about Him..U gone N had a Relapse?
Spittin w/ False Raps..coz his Location Indicates his Ghost Writer..
got kicked to the Curb..now this Bitch thinks he's a Street Fighter

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[Brooklyn Stand Up]

15-2 Still Wack Since U In My Crew Ill Try N Flip Ya Wayz
Leave U Like Pac Lookin For Better Dayz
Detained Envy's Me So Im Gettin Under His Skin Like Stiches
Ya Verses Go Up N Down More Den Light Switches (Whos Ya Ghostwriter Biotch?)
U Couldnt Have Hot Thoughts Even If I Baked Ur Brain
The Executives Most Wackest Member... [Token]- B.I.Detained
Ill Pop Shots Over The Net Like I Was Playin Tennis
He Wanna Go To Jail 1 Day So He Can Say Hes A Menace
[GeT OfF my DiCk]
I Demolish Any Chance U Got For A Winning Spree
U Need More Den Mortal Kombat To Finish Me

Was ALMOST Fun...

Damn nice battle.

Flow- B.I. Detained
Punches- Tie
Metas- Envy Ny
Multis- Tie
Wordplay- Envy Ny
Structure- B.I. Detained
Less played- Envy
Overall- Envy

Vote- Envy

That sex line hurt you a little bit B.I. Detained.. Never use sex punches. No matter how you flip them, They wack.

Good battle.. No hate family.

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Opening: (BI) (Just because the struct on urs was wack env)
Punches: Tie
Personals: Envy
Vocab: BI
Structure: BI
Flow: Tie
Wordplay: Envy
Closer: BI
Enjoyment: BI
Overall: This was really close but BI gets my vote..

fuck good battle,

ite,

flow-envy(came of better)
punches-b.i
personals-envy(just well more personal.lol)
structure-tie(b.i-bit streched envy-bit choppy)
opener-b.i
closer-envy(both abit played but put well),


overall really close shit but envy just edged it for me,

plz hit the battle in my sig up.thx.

...........pz

[I]Origannly posted by K
personals-envy(just well more personal.lol)
wtf??..he had 1 personal..i dont undetstand this site
peeps see thangs that arent there.............
looks like its bk to Home for me...

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Yo that shit was dope, I would say punches was a tie, vocab went to B.I, and because B.I came stronger on this, I'm going to give him my vote. It was a close ass battle though...Good shit.

Return da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100267

My Structure Was Messed Up I Think Dat Was Funny As Fuck.......IHad 1 Line Go Outta Place..n Slim Thug Alwayz Voting Against Me Is Gettin Funny..

Upp

Naw envy...I dont got nothin on ya dawg..Vs Token I read wrong verse for wrong person and on the opener only time ur struc was wack dawg...

Fuck. The battle was raw.
I gotta say the both of you dropped pretty potent.
The only edge I seen in this battle was the closer.
I didn't really like either one but B.I. ended his harder.
Excellent drop for both of you. Too close to call in the majority of categories. i give it to B.I. I related more to it.

pretty good battle from u both...yeah i agree with token on the sex line...lol....but BI had the personals, structure, and flow....u both pretty much tied in punches....and Envy had the vocab, metas, and complexity....here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Vocab - EnVy
Multis - EnVy (had a few)
Metas - EnVy
Personals - B.I.
Punches - Tie
Structure - B.I.
Flow - B.I.
Creativity - B.I.
Complexity - EnVy
RhymeScheme - Tie
Wordplay - EnVy

5 out of 11 - EnVy Ny
4 out of 11 - B.I. Detained
2 out of 11 - Tie

Overall - close battle i gotta say...BI came pretty damn good....but Envy equaled up in wordplay and tied in punches....overall i gotta say envy got this only because of my breakdown....nice battle from u both...no hate...just a vote

Vote - EnVy Ny

peace
4:20

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