First Battle Ever On Rb
Good Luck.
10Lines You Have 20mins To Post Your Verse After Mines Check IN>

Shrty4Chrst Checking In
Ready to go
I'm down for the rules
I'm checkin in start this aight homey
No hate votes
U spit first


aight
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Sorry i was away il just keyd this

hi, how are you - My names Mem0ryz...Understand? - im new
There's no kidding you...
your lacking flow and punches and also...rhyme too
I defined you, now duck cos you tryed n got hit
Stop it… no1 hates the owners they just hate ur hypotenis
Got it now have we, or you just beginning to learn
Take your turn…you might get lucky pfff - like im concerned
and if you revise Chrst's lines you should surely find...
Hot Rhymes? Nah… He’s Just Hard Hitting W/ Corney Rhymes..

Aight

I new to this board, but old to this game
I'm just bored, so I'ma shatter this dame
Every single of your lines were lame
It must be the cocaine pumpin through ur veins
U got too close to my flame and became
A burn victim, what a shame for this dame
The only way your rhymes would be hot
Is if you took them from my rhyme pot (rhyme book)
Connect the dots and you'll see that g ot this game on lock
Before u heard the gun shot, bullets rocked your chest and u dropped

aight now votes

Uppin for votes
This was a short simple battle
Shouldn't be to hard to drop a vote
Aight much appreciated

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shorty took this one.......it was kind of a basic battle but memoryz you need to work on your structure, it will improve the overall flow of your verse, make it run smoother....you guys need to work on adding more punches into your verse and also personals.....keep elevating and stay up....peace

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