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Old 12-22-03, 06:47 PM   #1
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think bout it

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Been sick wit a style 4 a while I got sophisticated issuez//
Abnormally neva formally causin heartbreak providin da tissuez//
I break bones & take chrome & take thronez//
Guaranteed 2 get down lik disfunctional famz & break homez//
leave yo thoughtz divided lik political parties//
Can get rough & tough lik basic trainin in da armies//
Basically masterin an ill flow tat can make ill dow//
Turnin wifes 2 wid-owz ya get slept on lik pill-owz//
Got nice no sacrifice but the truth it was accidental//
This rap thing is mental every1 knew I had potential//
Burnin sheetz of paper wit pure labor//
Savin shit 4 later cause my shit is deep lik craters//
Shawties I kno want me launch careers & blow//
Don't even kno if they there 4 show//
Really give a fuck bout these//
Imagine a life nuthin right without cheeze
Think bout it can live without it really good factors//
Most rapperz livin fake livez & u wonder y they good actors//
U want me 2 slumber 2 go 3 feet under cause u learnin from me//
I'm currently known displayed & shown so peeps kno about me lik da birdz & da bees//
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Old 12-22-03, 07:04 PM   #2
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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Old 12-22-03, 07:05 PM   #3
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Old 12-22-03, 10:01 PM   #4
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its allright. structure was ok....need to work on vocab overall ok
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