Crew Leaders
12-14
Due Thursday

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Child Support Check..
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Check

I'll Spit Probably Tuesday.

Its The Only Day I'm Off Work.

I'm Not Going To School Today.

I'll Post In About 30..Was Hoping You'd Post First..

TR Jus Spit Blanks Like A Wooden Shell, I’m Too Good To Fail
Like Mute Kids, Your Ill? Well, You Couldn’t Tell//
U Shoulda Spit Already..Quit Duckin Man, Gotta Check YaSelf Into The Hotel Of Opportunity Just To Have A Fuck-Inn Chance//
Swore Im Crazy Hottie'll Have U Turnin Blue But Soon Ur Gonna Be Sporting Navy Acro Nim Tryna Top WE? U Have No Chance To De-fetus like Aborted Babies//
Imma Cut The Pressure By Sawing The Tension, If I Drop First, TR Will Be Withdrawing Contention
Nobdody Recognizes U As A Vet He Has’ta Pencil n Color A Hut To Be Drawing a-TENT-son(attention)//
Ya Skillz Are A Mystery (None There) Drop Him In Jefferson City And Have TR In A State Of Missouri (Misery)
TR Is Like Thrown Out Family Trees Cuz Acro Nim Don’t Want You In Their History//
Your At The End of the Rope With No Slack I Ain’t Gonna Hold Back
You Musta Thought I Put On a Larry Bird Jersey They Way I Throw Back//
Don’t Post, Your Already Late Like The Crocodile Hunter Gettn Bit, I Tore Into Ya, Mate/ Lol.

Didn't Realize I Went Over By 5....Didn't Look Like It On MS Word....

But.

hottie70603: ...blah..think i went over...let me check
NiceWithTheBlah: you can go over, i dont really care

He Said Its Ok.

*dramatization*
NiceWithTheBlah: Hey wanna cyber
Hottie: no!
NiceWithTheBlah: Ohh well, your gonna get fucked anyway
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Head of a crew, literally, but damnit I want my pleasure soon
But with Dadi, Saladin, Ruth and Av, lets hope you're not a biter too
Think Hottie might play for the other team, the way Warlords has been
I mean shit she's the only female in a crew of gay men
And has beens... But fuck it, Wits End is dope, I mean shit
The talent level sucks, but atleast Trapt Wit named it
Just another net bitch to rip I mean she's pry even got a dick
And its sad when her RB achievement was having Dez beat...

....off to her pic
Here, I'll even add shit so this line is streatched like yours hun............................................... ...............................................
^^^ Kind of reminds me of you, I mean it says nothing relevent but always has periods run
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Dont worry baby, we can always kiss and make up

i'm deciding to go and vote on all of the battles here...


well this didn't seem close to me at all... hottie never got ride of those stretched lines...
no1 likes them especially me... when they're stretched like that it's hard to find a good punch...
it seemed kinda weak n all...

TR... i never knew he battled... maybe he doesn't... but this was...eh decent...
harder punches, personal...flowed better n all..

gotta give it to TR

uppin for votes,
good luck Hottie
you know i love you

Very easy win for Realist...

Hottie's shit was so very stretched and is in the old style of battling.

Not alot of good wordplay, just alot of forced.
(Missouri-misery), (A-tent-son-attention), (fuck INN) that's just so forced and blah.
And so are the little explanations in the middle of the verse...
And all the // crap at the end.
And even a touch played (throwback).
Also, I thought everyone but newbs had caught on about the shorter, tighter format.

Sorry, Hottie's verse was borderline painful to read.

Realist brought the personals, and the format, cept for the mocking her part at the end, the flow was on the mark...

And of course, the punches, both to her and her crew...
Tight, effective, and personal.
(That opener was hilarious and hard as shit)

Good showing, nice merk.

Peace

Holla back...

Vote here!

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okay...i'm coming fair on this one..


Hottie baby...theres a such thing as too many multies in text...the flow u was using
is better used in audio...in text it should be...

blah blah blah blah setup
blah blah multi blah punch

u know what i mean?....and honestly...alot of the punches were kinda weak
sweetheart..but i still love you..


TR...decent battle...opener was good...alot of cheesiness in between...but it was
enough to pull of the win...better structure and punches...


vote-TR

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Hottie: Your verse was wayyy stretched, work on your structure, like 13th said

blah blah blah blah setup
blah blah multi blah punch

it works more efficient that way, it flows better, and the punch is easier read and understood that way.

TR: Nice opener, had a nice structure and you had better punches, which was enough to pull the win

V/ TR

sorry Hottie, but he took this...