Born unable to speak, he put his Heart Into Sketches
No vocal Pallette, and so he'd use his Artists Perspective
to Chart his Aggresion .. a Means to Release His Anger
Yet His Final Portrait left critics at some what of a Cliff Hanger
The meaning placed behind it was never Revealed or Seen
so this is my interpertation on what this picture Means to Me
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His inner Child walks the Stomach's Lining Afraid and Hopeless
Silently Sweeping his Secrets Beneath a Wave of Emotions
Attempting to Stay Focused as the pressure's Teathing his Mind
and Crashing Lightning interrupted the Cleavage Of The Skies
the Heathen's Opened Wide .. he Breathed a Sigh of Disbelief
As he Doubled Back, Awestruck at the Sight He'd Seen
the Lightning Ceased at that moment, something was Reaching Out
Suddenly two Glaring Eyes had appeared Beneath the Clouds
Piercing Down on the Youth, it's mouth Opened to say Something
He realised it was His Conscience speaking to him From With In
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"Listen to what i tell you, as i won't Say This Twice
These portrait's were All Leading Up to you Paying The Price
and Taking Your Life inevitably, as Depicted In This Painting
With your Back To The World and the Distance Fading
Plus you feel Caved In .. shown by Your Hostile Surroundings
The Low Sky, Closing Ocean and Colossal Mountains.
but you've Lost It Now & there's Tears on Saddened Faces
As your Work's Admirers see your Death as a Talent Wasted
It seems Faced With constant critics, & a Deficiancy of Speech
Led you into a Bout with Depression, leaving you Mentally Weak
the Abstract Scenes you depicted were actually Due To Ya Madness
This wasn't a Brush with Death, it was Suicide On The Canvas"


Peace.

^This is your IP bitch!

^This is your IP bitch!

^This is your IP bitch!

^This is your IP bitch!

^This is your IP bitch!

^This is your IP bitch!

Originally posted by Born To Kill Real nice, Cam... I didn't get near the same interpretation as you did from that... But not everyone is suppossed to see things the same. Nice piece, only slightly simple with your vocab. Good structure and flow. Great imagery. Meaning was kinda blah, but only cuz I disagree. I don't see it as his conscience in the pic... I see it as "God" taking notice that you are shortcutting through life. Perhaps judging. Maybe there's a slight similarity. But I didn't see death anywhere. Just a Big Brother type of thing. 7.50/10 Peace... And peep Asylum if you get the chance!