alright heres the deal, i just wanted some feedback on this and it was closed in Open Mic cause it was my first post, so if the MODS in this arnt as strict i hope to get some replys other than saying the fuckin threads closed.

I deserve a day for myself, to take some time to realize
i cant change, everyday is the same, pullin into the game
about to get a ounce, drag it out, smoke it loud, show um lil punks what its about
when i see what i go through, from another point of view, everything i use to do, makes me seem invincible, cause all i know now is im the one your gonna look too when you need a hand, a gun to show you what to do
my life is complicated to much stress, got me depressed, losing control of my thoughts makin shit seem tainted, but its all what its all about, how about you say you make a ounce, but get jacked, back to the ghetto now your in trouble, cause now you gotta double what you just lost, its harder than it looks, many people think of it all the same, maybe if you choose to look at it another way, but now its time to pave the way, and grow some dro to make the rest of my life betta dayz....fuck no


Hook:

I live the life of a drug dealer, snow growing from my basement
I hate to have to choose another way to get out of my wasted
Feelings like i cant make anything for myself
So instead i ruin lifes and turn people into hell


For what its worth, im sorry, i tried to change
i know my momma wasnt proud when i reached that age
where i could change, think thoughts of my own
so instead of gettin a job, i make money and grow
For what its worth i cant stop the way i think
its the mood of the mode i made when i cant sleep
countin sheep never worked, i lay awake and just think
makin another plan, i figure out, stand out, do it, within a week
now i made a quick grand and i spent it all
now what?
i sell a dime quick, and a ounce for back up
now im back stacked up, seeing what i see
knowing what i'd be, if i never smoked weed.

umm..it was probably closed for a reason..maybe you did not post links to 3 previous battle that you have replied to..anyways you probably wont get any feedback here either. cause it will also be closed.