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Aryan Occupation
IP: 40E9 F947
The chemical plan:
Tick tock, this is a anotha drop that makes time stop/ So I claim my membership to da hip hop, growin like a cash crop/ no slaves to work for this bloody past, so hard to mop/ Cant clean the stains of the cockasian, whippin da pavement/ Superiority is the arrangement so don't get fooled by inocence/ this aryan brotherhood always been up to no good till da present/ so many sentences tha make no sense like da amendments/ only applying to da chosen race, ignoring our presence/ fishy smell, it be a pestilance of pure evil tha has no fury./ just like a jury, sentence yall ta death by lethal inject/ spit a gum and slap it away like mr. perfect in this close circuit/ i realize dat our existance is worthless like fake pearl necklace/ thats why south central l.a bred the generation with a menace/ the flow is short and intence in this city were times is tence/ i'm out with a shout to da devil, play dat treble, do you resemble/ the reality in our temple, die anotha day like bond gettn away/ |
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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IP: 4288 40C9
this was ok.. i didn't like it thats much,, but keep at it dawg. you will get better, just takes time.
You need to post 3 links to 3 different battle that you have read other wise this would get closed.! Peace Good Luck in the Future |
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IP: F36A FECD
Ok man...
You have VERY simple rhymes, this isnt bad, but you need to read some other people open mics... try something by sand, or g hod... or me ;-) anyways, try to rhyme the words in a way that wouldnt be expected! nice peice tho, keep writing... |
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