10 Lines

10 Minutes From YOUR Check In


Im Checking In Right Now

Peace

Checked in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............

come on Eki son i know u can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I got ur back but il comment honestly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey [Crooked] Comical, You need to check your [Optical],
Because you should have seen that your about to get [Cooked ]Comical
I checked out your other battle with that cat [Jay.Q]
You got confidence now, just because dick riders [Vote-4-u]
Now I will expose my [Battle – tactic], your obsessed with [10-lines]
[Pathetic], Time to wake you up , give you a [Shake]
Like popcorn before a video , [Unpack and Bake]
In this battle you’re the [Side factor]
Like Ja Rule next to Steven Segal [supporting Actor]
Relax am in the movie [Section] too, Compare me to [Evolution]
I [Elevate] with every line, just wait for the [Conclusion]
[Implement] a thing about [Lord of the Rings] in to this [verse],
[Supplement] this cat, with a [wack-mc –curse]
You can see iv had the [Holywood] flow through out this [Out burst]
you got murdered [And I spat first], we’ll name this movie [Skill-Not equal],
relax , the victim always get a second chance in the [Sequal]

I Dont Have A Time Limit now ... Your Pre Written Before Check in.. You Should Be DQued .. But I Just dont Have Time Limit Now


AINT NO WAY U TYPED ALL THAT IN 3 MINUTES

NICE TRY THOUGH

i started typing after i did my first fuckn post when it fucked up ......... which owuld have been my first fucken check in................................................ .................................................. ..........dont have a time limit.. am still confident

Im CROOKED-Comical You Bitch,when You Diss Me I Just Smile /
Your Structure Is CROOKED , Just Like Your Ma'Fuckin Lifestyle/*
Belive Its True , Your Through ,Your Poo ,Im Rubber Your Glue/
You Turnin RED Emberassed , Gettin Beatin BLACK And BLUE /
Im Beatin Your Ass,Cause You Falsely Thought You Were Sick/
But You Dont Need Me On Your ASS,You Got Reighn On Ya Dick/**
Beatin Ya , Defeatin Ya , Im So MuthaFuckin Hot Im Heating Ya/
Wanna Do This Again,Tell Me When And Where I'm Meeting Ya/
Beatin Ya So Quick You Will Have A Very Unusual Crazy Spasm/
Your Such A Fuckin PUSSY,If I Licked U You'd Have An Orgasm/


* His Structure Is Like This

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PEACE

fuck u crooked comical it just got personal now bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

p.s. u cant fucking rap a christmas pressie bitch!!!!!!!!

FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hmmmmmm

Can You Read Or Are You half Retarded ? You Did 16 Lines


Oh Well


VOTE YALL

Aight Lookk

Structure-Crooked
Flow-Crooked
Horribility-Eki
Vocab-Neither
Punches-Crooked
Multies-Neither
Overall vote-Crooked-Comical

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ill take that.........................................thank s for the vote.............................................. .................................................. ..............................1-0 to u

vote-crooked comical

eki u need to lose the brackets.. u were kool until you came to the line where you rhyme "line" then u went to shake and it killed your flow, crooked came hot n personal with the first 4 bars which laced the win to me.. he was more clever and kept a fluent flow, hit a little harder

return the favor vote on this please, no one votes anymore they sleepin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100990

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