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Old 12-24-03, 05:41 PM   #1
rellik
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What's Gayer than Richard Simons?

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Fags that can't critique .

I mean, I'd post a link of the examples...but i'll just give you al la comparison.

I dropped a verse in Open Mic. I must admit, it's not at the highest level of complexity, but it has a bloody message and the multi usage is overwhelming. Three fags come and tell me that my shit sucks and is pointless.

Comparison:

I dropped feedback on some morons piece called "Remembering the dead" or some shit like that. IT was so poorly constructing, I nearly got mad!. I mean, I'm not one for gun references or using the word "bitch", "nigga", or "yo" in every one of my bloody lines..but he was. Then as the feedback comes rolling in everyone's telling him that it was "FIRE" and "TIGHT AS HELL". tHA FUCK? Ya'll lacking judgement.

SO, from now on...i'll be remarked as the "Bitch of the crop". NEVER , will I hold back any of my opinions. You WILL feel the wrath of my critique of justice. No sugar-coating, no lying, straight truth. Ya ready? I don't give a fuck if you're not, i'm coming anyways.

FUCKERS
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