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Old 12-24-03, 05:41 PM   #1
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What's Gayer than Richard Simons?

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Fags that can't critique .

I mean, I'd post a link of the examples...but i'll just give you al la comparison.

I dropped a verse in Open Mic. I must admit, it's not at the highest level of complexity, but it has a bloody message and the multi usage is overwhelming. Three fags come and tell me that my shit sucks and is pointless.

Comparison:

I dropped feedback on some morons piece called "Remembering the dead" or some shit like that. IT was so poorly constructing, I nearly got mad!. I mean, I'm not one for gun references or using the word "bitch", "nigga", or "yo" in every one of my bloody lines..but he was. Then as the feedback comes rolling in everyone's telling him that it was "FIRE" and "TIGHT AS HELL". tHA FUCK? Ya'll lacking judgement.

SO, from now on...i'll be remarked as the "Bitch of the crop". NEVER , will I hold back any of my opinions. You WILL feel the wrath of my critique of justice. No sugar-coating, no lying, straight truth. Ya ready? I don't give a fuck if you're not, i'm coming anyways.

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Old 12-24-03, 05:42 PM   #2
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And it's not their personal opinions that annoy me so much...it's their lack of fucking judgement. Their lack of understanding for the basic elements of literature (i.e.rap, poetry). I'm talking about multis, wordplay, punchlines, storylines, topicality, metaphors, similies..ya know?
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Old 12-24-03, 05:45 PM   #3
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And BRUKLOR.
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Old 12-24-03, 05:46 PM   #4
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and sulbime d
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Old 12-24-03, 05:47 PM   #5
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Richard Simmons is Gay?

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Old 12-24-03, 05:48 PM   #6
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To tell you the truth, no matter hopw good looking you are, this thread is really dumb, and though you are right, we don't need announcements everytime you find something out.
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Old 12-24-03, 05:52 PM   #7
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I'd post in depth replies if only my pieces got a decent critique once in awhile. . Instead, we allow our forum to be butchered by a foolish set of rules which are, unfortunately, well-enforced. You know what the best Christmas present could be for me? The repeal of those rules. Make it happen, OM.
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Old 12-24-03, 05:53 PM   #8
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thats why im a freeposter rellik. but i do have a battle going right now
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Old 12-24-03, 05:55 PM   #9
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Skiddz, there IS a point to this thread. And I don't announce shit every time I find something out. This is the equivalent to a "general chat" thread, is it not? It's used for informing. Well enforced under freedom of fucking speech.

IF you don't like what I have to say, simply don't reply. I'd say there are well more than 2000 other members who might find what I have to say appealing...alright sweety? (I still have much respect for you skiddz, you are my hero).
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by rellik
Skiddz, there IS a point to this thread. And I don't announce shit every time I find something out. This is the equivalent to a "general chat" thread, is it not? It's used for informing. Well enforced under freedom of fucking speech.

IF you don't like what I have to say, simply don't reply. I'd say there are well more than 2000 other members who might find what I have to say appealing...alright sweety? (I still have much respect for you skiddz, you are my hero).
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What about me? I gave you in-depth feed on your open mic. :-(
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Old 12-24-03, 05:58 PM   #11
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Skiddz, there IS a point to this thread. And I don't announce shit every time I find something out. This is the equivalent to a "general chat" thread, is it not? It's used for informing. Well enforced under freedom of fucking speech.

IF you don't like what I have to say, simply don't reply. I'd say there are well more than 2000 other members who might find what I have to say appealing...alright sweety? (I still have much respect for you skiddz, you are my hero).


I wasn't saying anything to piss you off. I know exactly how you feel, believe me. Its a simple answer for me. I do not give them any lies. Im there to help out, and no critique is not helping. And word to what G.Hod said. People give even smaller replies to get their own shitty, half assed pieces up.
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Old 12-24-03, 05:59 PM   #12
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Old 12-24-03, 06:07 PM   #13
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Well, I'm quite apologetic skiddz...for some reason, everyone gets the gist that I'm pissed off, iunno.

Hero...or methane...

Skiddz, C-section, Aisle 5, Loki, Bruklor, and Ghost are all my heroes...but don't tell...(you're my god)..
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rellik join me, you could be RBs best female freeposter. that will only add to me liking you.

good looking, athletic, raps, and freeposts. now thats word.

fuck doing open mics and battle online they are a waste of time. but it takes real skills to freepost.
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Psssst, I can teach yoo how to freepost without people noticing.
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