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checkin in.....................i guess i'm goin first?......its koo.................................

so here it is...

1st thought I had about you: goodness this dude is really soft...
I ain't never seen your battles though, and I already know u lost..
at a cost I could show you the boss, but naw, i'ma water it down
as hard as it sounds, easily i can pound, and slaughter this clown
with predicates and nouns, no guns are needed, no knife at hand
only during this battle, after this, u can rap with your life at hand
i'm twice the man you are, and more than two times experienced
you stupid for steppin cuz my level is so high, you'd get delerious
try me i'm serious; in these 8 bars I can expose you to some pain
I'm like a fat mans weight, I gain. your just like a bicep; you strain
you can resort to some cain and still won't be able to fade me
I'll never calm down...not even if your tightest girlfriend layed me
not if she paid me, i'm just too hot for tv like Jerry Springer movies
uncencored, you couldn't win if you bought lyrics that r worth 2 g's

it's clear that i'm just too good for someone of you stature to beat
MY verse style is elite, as a treat, i'll so much a master this shit*

*italian accent, said like "sheet"

Like a handless boxer you can’t possibly win because you have no punches
You battling is a contradiction like a fat bitch doing crunches while she munches her lunches
If Elton John were standing next to you it’d be hard to compare the gayness
You’re so stupid retards come over to your house to feed you and play chess
Drooling uncontrollably as they laugh at beating you, now comes my scripture
Spell it out to you cause like blind men taking photos you don’t get the picture
Da Abstrakt Assassin is harassing your chin with right hooks and uppercuts
Battling me is more dangerous than drinking blood straight from cuts on sluts
Absent Minds can’t recall you at all after this downfall, crash and burn bitch
Just like surviving a car accident while fucking a ho and still getting the itch
That’s karma as my sword crashes through your armour and slices your torso
Just like Carter challenging a midget there’s no need to check the score ho
You’re Deluded like Def Jam ending a fantasy retracting his contract
Trice Optics can’t stop this watch these flying dropkicks attack your back
Your spines off track as it flies through your lips, you just can’t handle this
Abandon ship before I dismantle it like icebergs with electromagnetic attraction
You seem out of place like Van Dam crying while Hugh Grant handles the action
1st only spits constant illness when the AIDS infected retard gets overexcited
Bitch you couldn’t have a vision of victory if you bribed the most optimistic psychic

Good stuff boys, u both write overly necessary stuff but oh well, "while she munches her lunches" couldve been left out but yeah it rhymed, "Van Damme Crying while hugh grant takes the action" HA good shit man nice -- as for 1st to wreck u had good stuff too but he had more metaphors that were punches, im down with the Italian pride tho rock on

this was a good battle, but ver took it in my
opinion. its unofficial, but this is my opinion.
p'z out!

verstyle takes this with a more complex approach to the battle. his punches hit harder and his metas were more complex...and thats what beat 1st. 1st your verse was good...but punches just didnt hit hard enough....good battle.

my vote: verstyle

I agree really....

Both were pretty tight, some good similies etc... some personals could have been incorporated more tho I guess...
I think both were kinda the same style, but in the end Verstyle's had more substance... better punches, consistancy..

Props to both...

Vote - Verstyle

Return the Favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=99923

Finally some votes.. Harlem's Finest , think that you might of forgotten to poll vote.. can you go back and check...Consider this my 1st upping

Thank You
Peace

nice battle
clean shit
i liked the first guys verse/
didnt feel the outro
verse had sum nice wordplay an punches.
he took my vote in this battle
V- verstyle



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101625

^^newb battle i guess like this one..BUT A GOOD BATTle
PEEP
honestly..

pc1

vers u wanna battle me later

L's breakdown

punches - verstyle
personals - tie
flow - tie
creativity - verstyle
opener - tie
closer - 1st to wreck
structure - 1st to wreck

OVERALL - verstyle (on punches)

Good battle, close shit

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

punches - verstyle
personals - tie
flow - tie
creativity - verstyle
opener - tie
closer - 1st to wreck
structure - 1st to wreck

overall:verystyle

dis was a good battle but i tink verystles punches hit a lot harder

no hate

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Verse took this with better punches
everything else was pretty equal

vote verse.
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