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12-22-03, 10:09 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Slim Thug Diss: Watch What You Say
IP: 17A5 81EF
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Reply #2 Reply #3 Yeah nigga, this dedicated to you, Slug Thing, yeah, aight, you ready, check it... Call me a herb?! I drop concern down ya spinal nerves 'til it burns...bubbles, and churns Make ya swollow sperm-o-derms and make ya learn how to come hard durin' firm battle words Bend ya back 'til it snaps...retracks back, then CRACK!!!...ya tampax falls outta ya ass crack Ya lack rhyme tracks, and ya verse attacks more ball sacks than a split stick stack of anthrax Ya lips smack dicks more than Pams tits, Fix ya shit with rhyme tips, put 'em on ya Christmas List Is you pissed?! If not, my fist wont miss to split ya lip lisp in a short visit to Doctor Ape-ist Cut off his hands, cant land punches is as demanding as the hand to hand Dan DiVito wingspand This mans fans got mustaches, beards...and pore glands that send mens hands into they pants Niggas forearm is strong, but I sworn he got horny and performed gay porn...just to get warm Stucture form is like Fraturnity Dorms...gay hormones sworm together...then Slim Thug is born Outta breathe?! Make ya digest the rest of my fist in ya flesh,...I'll try not to make a mess I'm obsessed with ya death, stab t-west through ya chest without a bullet-proof vest...YES!!! Ya dome like a bolder, tiped, rolled-her, ya older, but I still bend ya sholders like Folders Ram ya like Bulger, Lyrical Soliders, put holes in torsos, tell RB to hold-her, grind ya like Folgers Dont talk to fight, cant see me, no sight...unliked, get the invite to "Diss Slim Thug Night" A dyke with more Tyke bikes to match ya rhymes right?! Dont mess, or I drop another Open Mic Sorry the lines is streached soooo damn long, basically a freestyle, didnt worry about the lines at the moment. Last edited by Peety Popeyes : 12-23-03 at 08:38 PM. |
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12-22-03, 10:26 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 17A5 81EF
Uppin' on this.
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12-22-03, 11:11 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 19AF 50C1
WORDPLAY WAS GREAT NEEDS SOME MINOR HELP THOUGH ADDIDN DETAIL TO PUNCHES
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12-22-03, 11:50 PM | #4 | ||||||
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Good diss but I think based on this drop that you got a hell of a battle ahead of yourself.
Slim Thugga ain't no pushova. Maybe a lil more effort may have been needed. I think in my own opinion that the drop was tight. I like the venom in the lyrics. I think that everything was on the up and up. I'd like to see the response. |
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12-23-03, 12:06 AM | #5 | |||||||
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**ghood multis**.......nice punches...............be ready for a batttle.................nice werdplay...........stretched but good.........
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12-23-03, 12:34 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 17A5 81EF
Yeah, thanks.
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12-23-03, 01:19 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 17A5 81EF
Uppin' for more replys/comments.
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12-23-03, 02:38 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 17A5 81EF
^^^
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12-23-03, 02:40 PM | #9 | ||||
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..Nice...good variation of multis..your punches were good..I enjoyed reading it..Let's get ready to rumble!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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12-23-03, 04:47 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 17A5 81EF
^^^Ahha, thanks man.
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12-23-03, 07:45 PM | #11 | ||||||
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Uppin' for more replys/comments.
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12-23-03, 08:33 PM | #12 | ||||||
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^^^!!!
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12-23-03, 08:47 PM | #13 | ||||
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The structure was off.. ill start with that
Had great multis in this, n' the flow was well, very fluent.. not a bad diss.. |
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12-24-03, 12:48 AM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: 17A5 81EF
Where that nigga at?!
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12-24-03, 12:56 AM | #15 | ||||||
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yea good dis make sure you can back up your shit though...i was feelin the multis in most places...don't force em they should flow naturally....you know....kool well one thing to work on is punching harder ....i maen you spit a hell of a lot of multis ...but you only had mediocre punches......keep up the good dissin just don't choke on your beef peaceout..
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