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Shadow is here and I'm back wit a vengence/
Ready to shut down emcees who ready to witness/ This rapper whose in tha best lyrical fitness/ My weight is too heavy don't attempt to lift this/ My mens just post up watchin my battle/ Emcees get paralysed when they get caught in my lasso/ But I ain't no cowboy my words are loud boy/ Deals in my future tryin to be rich now boy/ Still collidin wit haters and phony spectators/ Be humble for tha moment and leave em a wreak later/ My skills evolve daily so theres no end to tha onslaught/ Trapped in tha struggle but still able to make these bombs drop/ Ready to take on any emcee who wants to battle/ My vocab ain't strong but I still dismantle/ Crews and solos artists alike/ No ones safe in my book so who willin to fight/ |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Give me some positive and negative feedback. One
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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it was okay. i thought it was a bit simple, but i think it could be better. need to work on wordplay. keep writing and return the favor on one of my drops.
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IP: D1F1 67C9
I thought It was Too Simple..
The bars Were Even Almost Every Time But The Flow WAS off T o Me.. oVER-ALL, tHIS WAS oK..
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