Yo you know the rules:

10-12 lines
No crew or hate votes. (Try to keep it fair)
My spit is due by 4:00 and my opponent is gonna spit next time he comes to the site.

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The Madman

Breakdancer in Brooklyn

aiight im hurr....I'll spit in a lil while aiiight........................................... .................................................. .....................................

This is my spit so check it:

Yo I'm about to merk this kid fore I even start/
I'll take out ya brain personally and then I'll cut out ya heart/
You takin' big shit but ya skill is microscopic/
You say you got mad flow, but rappin' just ain't ya topic/
I'll cave in ya skull leave you laughin' like a retarded clown/
Insert a knife in ya back, just before I lay a ryhme down/
I'll take ya whole crew on, and not even bust a sweat/
Leave a loss on his record that he'll never forget/

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The Madman

Breakdancer in Brooklyn

Oh and heres the finisher:

Like on Nightmare on Elm Street, I blur reality and fantasy/
I'll leave ya carcass in pieces just so the fans can see/

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The Madman

Breakdancer in Brooklyn

ok...

Battlin Me?Your Makin less sense Than Guilty Insanity Pleads
My Rhymes are spitting this Herb Lyke SunFlower Seeds
Kid lyke Forigen Students The way u flow jus aint Fluent
Kll cut out ur toung so u cant be understood lyke ESL students
Ya lifes Short-Bread cause Ya a gangsta wit Short-lead
Im hangin this Marry on a Clif Cause ur a Virgin-on-Edge
I end ya In-a-sense,n leave u comin home to parents In-a-Dread
Ill Ejaculate on this Newbee So u can Stick to tha Basics
N then Ill Smash ya Head On My verse so u can Face-It!!

Esl is english fo a second langue if u didnt kno
His sn is Short Gangsta
If a virgin is fucked she looses her Inosense--In-A-Sense

Aiight its nuffin....Uppin o n ya verse....

aiight uppin on this.............................................. .................................................. ......

upppin............................................ ..................................//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

kAssidy clearly won this in allmost every category lol
100% merkin

vote: kassidy

vote on this...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455

That was good bust Kassidy was wayyy more creative, plus he didnt forget his finisher? LOL my vote goes to kassidy for original verse and better punches----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

aiight good looks...even though they cant poll its still 2-0 me...still uppin............................................. .......................