man u all talk u bitch these the rules b4 u get murdered

10-12 lines
no hate dr crew votes
both have 1hr to drop both verses

see u in the feilds u bitch

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u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

aite checkin in man...

i getz 1 hour from when you drop ya scripts, so hurry ya bitch ass up...

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if you got beef with me, dot vote, if you a dick rider, dont vote, ill know if you a hater or dick rider, and you will get banned so back up...

aiight u bitch ur times up with all ur bitch talkn

DNF as i come and ~Devide u Soul~ and kill ur body and ~Provide ur Hole~ and u will burn to dust like a bitch that ~Demised his Coal~//
u a fake and u act like a ~Bitch from Queens~ if u wanna run ur mouth let ur balls drop cause u have a ~Pitch but no-Dreams~//
u should be merked and so i ~Stabbed u with Ice~ and u were crusified like jesus but u had been ~Fagged more then Twice~//
see u dont seem to understand u have been ~Shattered internally~ and ur family saw u once and ~Battered ur Eternity~//
as u try to talk down all u do is be a ~Pathetic Dictator~if u actually had ill rhymes then u would have a ~Tactics but u a Hater~//
DNF u like a ~virgin Nun~ if i saw u in the streets i be ~Searchin for a Gun~ cause u a fag and u still ~Urgin the dik tastin Gum~//

im uppin ur vote or u scared to reply u bitch u thought i was all talk...no if u dont reply u all talk and dont deserve to be a rapper full stop....MF FOol

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

haha had to leave you waiting till that last 10 minutes...

here goes...




Tolerant Level got 3 L’s to his name, so he wont get no votes, *1
and like swallowing nettles ill have you scratching at ya own throat,
you got no hope, ill turn you into a lizard or frog, then give you a loss,
cos you got no brain like the scarecrow from the wizard of oz,
And your from the Land of Oz so there’s no where to hide in ya head,
then I asked for wack newbies only, and you replied to the thread, *2
you saw the rugby world cup final, England always beat Australia, *3
you cant even spell ya countrys name so i know you’re a failure, *4
so I might as well start bending the spell as I send you to hell,
and like ya 2nd name, this battle is gonna start and end in an L, *5
You covered ya right eye to read an eye chart and read H...E L P
And you never saw the W, cos without left eye how can TLC, *6




a lot of you didnt get the wordplay or personals, so lt me explain them if you didnt catch them...

*1 = toLerant LeveL, L = Loss...
*2 = he replied to my thread when i asked for wack newbies...
*3 = England beat Australia in the rugby world cup final...
*4 = he spelt australia wrong in his location, he forgot the R in austRalia, so he's a failure...
*5 = his 2nd name LEVEL, starts and ends in an L, L = Loss...
*6 = TLC the group hasnt got left eye, TL = Tolerant [b]L[b/]evel, if i take both his eyes, TL cant see (C) TLC...


i hate having to explain, but there you go...


shouldnt be too hard to decide a winner...

Tolerant Level
I dissed, pointed out your stretched structure..
Take a hint..
Content wise your verse wasn't half bad..
You got the vocabulairy & multie's..
But you lack a certain battle mentality..
Seein' as your verse did not contain any solid punches & or..
Personals..in contradiction to DNF..who did.
Also..dont do the ~ thing it quite useless.

DNF
Clean structure..some mediocre..near weak lines..
But, you did have more personals..that was good.
Overall i saw no flaws..except for the flaws you already..
Know about, add more complexity etc to ur verses..
Also..dont explain everything, we get it.

vote:DNF


Return the favour..

Do not sway votes, next time you will be DQ'd -Token

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first of yall, nice spits to the both of yall. Now the vote:

TL-ur spit was alright but the flow was kinda choppy at times. had a lot of multis but sum of them were that good. U addin in extra syllables to them. Multis r supposed to match syllable 4 syllable. Ur punches were alright, they just didnt contain personals in them, punches are meant to be directed to the person and to do that good u need to use personals. Overall u had a decent spit but the main element of battlin is punches and u couldve dun better on ur punches.

DNF-u also had a good spit. Punches contained personals. You had some good wordplay in there. Flow was a bit choppy at times but not as choppy as TL's was at times. Overall u did pretty good but like STRIAGHT ACE said u just need some more complexity in you spit.

VOTE: DNF

return the fava when u C my name in the front lines forum, itll be much appreciated.
~1~

i respect the votes to but DNF u should be DQ'ed for swaying votes thats bullshit u should take that some where else not in my battles i find that cheating...

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^word

Structure-TL
vocab-TL
personals-DNF
multis-TL

VOTE:Tolerant Level

DNF,your spit was decent it would have been aiight if you didnt sway the vote. it was dead on arrival when i saw that.Its Drawin`.

TL ur spit was good ur vocab and all was good ur flow was a lil choopy (like A-DueCe-26mad3 said) but not bad drop u had more catagories takin in this battle and u had some nice punches to follow it

Opener-Tie
Closer-Tolerant level....good finisher, Dnf didnt get urs
Structure-Tolerant level, DNF all them numbering things are confusing u need 2 get rid of them....
Multi's- Tolerant level easily took this as they were in every line
Personals-DNF even tho the numbering was confusing he had sum good tight punches,tolerant level u need practice and im sure they wil hit harder....

overall-Tolerant level

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i said i only had to explain them cos you voted against me cos you didnt get them...

if you get them you dont have to read them, im not forcing you to read it, only if you dont get it... that aint swaying, so what the fuck?



mc aines vote dont count, cos even after explaining the punch, he didnt get it, so take his vote away now please mods...

i said if you dont get it dont vote, i even explained it, and he didnt get it... SO WHAT THE FUCK AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH DUMB VOTERS?
I EXPLAIN IT AND THEY STILL DONT GET IT?

GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE...

structure doesnt suffer by numbering it, the numbers dont have nothing to do with the verse...

and finally i had multi's in every line, even though i dont use ~ they are there...

THIS IS NOT SWAYING, I DONT WANT DUMB VOTERS...

WHY DO I HAVE TO EXPLAIN THIS? I SHOULDNT HAVE TO, BUT I CANT STOP DUMB VOTERS FROM BEING THICK AS SHIT...

SO DELETE THERE VOTES, THATS WHAT SWAYING IS...

IF YOU DONT GET IT WITHOUT THE EXPLANATIONS, DONT VOTE, IF YOU DONT GET IT WITH THE EXPLANATIONS DONT VOTE...

ITS AS SIMPLE AS THAT!

its 0-0 on the poll still...

props to those who voted on an overall scale from punches wordplay meta's &flow...

i'd just like to say...vote in future threads ima grace & i'll return da favor...cuz it seems very few here are educated bout' da game

&just to be gay...i'd vote TL in here too since he has no type of wordplay or punches wat-so-ever...but i cant...cuz im under100 posts!

show em' how its done RB...fuck punchlines &personals!
its all about friends &stroking of da ego's so dat we can have em' vote for US in our future battles!!

Man..... I get what you mean bout havin to explain shit... I've dropped bars that have a reverse effect simply 'cos peeps are lookin at it differently, Its wack... I got most of ya shit so as said, I didn't bother readin the explanations...but if peeps don't get it - Waste of creativity.... but yeah...

The battle was tight tho... TL's structure was pretty weak but its his own style I guess, just makes it flow less easily in places...
Had some nice lines in there, altho lacked any real personal disses which let the verse down slightly..
DNF came alot harder in that aspect, nice punches.. The whole Left Eye - TL'C was real tight, liked that shit...
Overall there was a better structure/flow and more creative personals 'n punches...
Props to both tho...

Vote - DNF

Return The Favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99923

DNF took this, better flow wittier lines, a few forced but he still came harder, other cat was iight just didnt quit connect a few times, bars a little stretched, keep at it.. DNF i know we dont like each other but im always honest, and u took this battle, and im pretty sure beef aside your honest, so return the favor ahnd hit this battle up theres too many newbie retards running around here..

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=102040