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Old 12-29-03, 03:48 PM   #1
BaG oF SkILLz
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Story for my Brother

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Replied: Asylum by Born To Kill
Cover by Penskills
Max Payne by Antonio Banderas


At the scene of the murder the chalk etched his carcass/
Why wasn't anyone here earlier to stop this??/
was I thinking when I didnt say good bye/
Now my brother's in his grave and all I see in my mind is his eyes/
A single mistake and his lungs lost his breathe/
The doctor came out of the E.R and informed us of his death/
My mother ran to me and cried on my shoulder/
She ran into the room touched Charlies body but it went from hot to colder/
His lips turned blue he was non existent to this world/
He left a son a daughter and a soon to be wife, his girl/
She was estatic in pain ...when she saw fragments of his brain/
Splattered on the table the doctors wasnt able to save him from this life, not a medicine of knife could bring back my brothers life/
He was taken into surgery but with a lack of urgency/
The doctors took too long, thats why I wrote this song/
My brother was a man who didnt bother anyone/
Now its too late he'll never see the sun/
He'll never see his kids when they graduate/
Instead he'll their guardian angel there to set them straight/
Charlie the world lost you too damn fast/
But I hope you know I love you and you wont be my past/
I'll see you when those lights open up in the clouds/
Remember when momma told us to turn the music down/
And our bet about the girl we were supposed to hit/
Man we did some messed up shit/
But it was all fun and games and now I'm all alone/
But I promise to take care of ya wife and kids and make sure they have a home/
So Rest in Peace dear brother cause I know you got my back/
Cause your love is like a drug, we're addicted to that/
Take care brother I'll be seeing you in a few/
Jus me and you the two brothers with God in heaven Just us Two/
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Old 12-29-03, 05:57 PM   #2
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Old 12-29-03, 06:11 PM   #3
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some deep lyrics there...feeling it..other than that what can i say on such a subject...keep writin ya stuff...meaning is good...pZ
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Old 12-29-03, 06:25 PM   #4
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shit was deep
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Old 12-29-03, 07:19 PM   #5
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yo dawg that was deep as i feel 4 u that shit was hot though hit up hail mary an down 2 ride
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Old 12-30-03, 12:24 AM   #6
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thanks for feeling this...it means alot to me...i put alot of heart into this...(im bag of skillz too)....I appreciate all the feedback
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