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12-29-03, 03:48 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Story for my Brother
IP: EBC0 3E3D
Replied: Asylum by Born To Kill
Cover by Penskills Max Payne by Antonio Banderas At the scene of the murder the chalk etched his carcass/ Why wasn't anyone here earlier to stop this??/ was I thinking when I didnt say good bye/ Now my brother's in his grave and all I see in my mind is his eyes/ A single mistake and his lungs lost his breathe/ The doctor came out of the E.R and informed us of his death/ My mother ran to me and cried on my shoulder/ She ran into the room touched Charlies body but it went from hot to colder/ His lips turned blue he was non existent to this world/ He left a son a daughter and a soon to be wife, his girl/ She was estatic in pain ...when she saw fragments of his brain/ Splattered on the table the doctors wasnt able to save him from this life, not a medicine of knife could bring back my brothers life/ He was taken into surgery but with a lack of urgency/ The doctors took too long, thats why I wrote this song/ My brother was a man who didnt bother anyone/ Now its too late he'll never see the sun/ He'll never see his kids when they graduate/ Instead he'll their guardian angel there to set them straight/ Charlie the world lost you too damn fast/ But I hope you know I love you and you wont be my past/ I'll see you when those lights open up in the clouds/ Remember when momma told us to turn the music down/ And our bet about the girl we were supposed to hit/ Man we did some messed up shit/ But it was all fun and games and now I'm all alone/ But I promise to take care of ya wife and kids and make sure they have a home/ So Rest in Peace dear brother cause I know you got my back/ Cause your love is like a drug, we're addicted to that/ Take care brother I'll be seeing you in a few/ Jus me and you the two brothers with God in heaven Just us Two/
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12-29-03, 05:57 PM | #2 | ||||||
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uppin
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12-29-03, 06:11 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
some deep lyrics there...feeling it..other than that what can i say on such a subject...keep writin ya stuff...meaning is good...pZ
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12-29-03, 06:25 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 24A3 C2B7
shit was deep
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12-29-03, 07:19 PM | #5 | |||||||
young mike-young bangers-
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IP: C1DA C961
yo dawg that was deep as i feel 4 u that shit was hot though hit up hail mary an down 2 ride
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12-30-03, 12:24 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
thanks for feeling this...it means alot to me...i put alot of heart into this...(im bag of skillz too)....I appreciate all the feedback
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